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9/28/23, 12:25 PM
Hello there~ I hope you enjoy this second chapter, the third and last chapter of this story is coming soon, it's a bit longer than the prior two. Anyhow, I really hope you guys enjoyed it, this story was a pleasure to write and proofread after the fact!
hairyartist
9/28/23, 12:04 PM
so hot, thank you
Sep 28, 2023
9/28/23, 11:57 AM
Hot first chapter!
9/28/23, 11:50 AM
I love how you describe this clown's victims losing their sense of self, cumming out their identity. A great chapter and I'm excited to continue reading.
9/28/23, 7:20 AM
Now we're cooking! I love that you introduced the element of the narrator getting hypnotized and played with too. It makes things so much more interesting and a little different from the standard version of this story. Keep up the great work - can't wait to read more!
9/28/23, 6:02 AM
So good! This chapter actually reminds me a ton of "Waking Up" by Derek Williams (which is another great story). Can't wait for the next chapter!
9/27/23, 9:19 PM
Oh my! fans head. SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! So very very very hot! What a great story. Love the repeats and figuring out the lines that were changed. Soooo good! I do have to admit the two to a bed part was a bit more awww than the group bed but overall the changes are super hot. What an interesting world this is!

9/27/23, 10:46 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you! And yes, the third go round probably did have the most romantic potential out of each of the loops, but I just couldn't resist having an army of jock-clad butt-sluts.

9/28/23, 12:19 AM
@[TickledPink](/user/show/151577) So yeah the communal sex games was hot, no doubt about it. But the two to a bed and the homage to the Sacred of Thebes made me think you were going to do that. Also I kept on expecting training to involve face to ass. hehe But OMG this was a hot and sexy story and I LOVE the way you did the world changes. The same day on repeat but with tiny changes, like the song or certain choices, so good. I also noticed that things staid the same when like goals had been met. So yeah, the whole group being together was fun but there was a sort of "awww how cute" element to the initial idea of pairing.

9/28/23, 5:58 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I did consider having them all paired up at one point, but yeah, not the romantic ending this time. And appropriate amounts of face-to-arse time is very important for any proper stretching regiment. Cheers!
Jan 13, 2010
9/28/23, 4:43 AM
Love it
9/27/23, 11:05 PM
There is minor error: “I slapped Vince across the face with my gloved hand hard enough to leave a faint red print on his face.” I think it was supposed to be Ted that was slapped.

9/28/23, 12:20 AM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Thanks, fixed and now waiting for approval for the change.
Kippers
9/28/23, 12:07 AM
I love a good teacher story, regardless of who is in control. Teachers, students, administrators, visiting parents can all become horny little cock lovers. I wish you had continued this one, but if you're done with it, maybe consider another school story about control?