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9/24/23, 4:19 PM
Hot story, but it needs a little bit of editing; at some points (starting, I think, with Paragraph 4) you get Trevor and Ryan's names reversed.

9/24/23, 4:45 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks for your feedback! The names in the kiss scene were on me, at the reception I initially wanted Ryan to be the one suspicious of the campground as he knows less about it, but it does make more sense to give that one to Trevor as he’s the one going investigating in the end. I’ve changed it around a bit, will definitely keep that in mind for my next story :)
9/22/23, 6:51 PM
Love your stories! Hoping Hatim gets to top some of these contestants--loved your Christmas muzak "toys" chapter. Definitely see the frat bro getting turned into a bottom. Looking forward to next chapters!

9/24/23, 4:23 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Aw, a blast from the past! Still one of my favorite stories.
9/22/23, 4:55 PM
Very exciting start! Hoping if Charlie loses at some point that the nipples come into play lol

9/24/23, 4:23 PM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) I have to imagine if he loses, that'll be part of it!
9/22/23, 5:05 AM
I love your writing so much! Always wildly inventive and clever and extremely hot and sexy. I'm very excited to see where this story goes. And thank you for all of the entertainment and pleasure you've given me and all your readers.

9/24/23, 4:22 PM
@[Anton729](/user/show/928205) Thanks! I'm interested to see how everyone votes...
9/22/23, 5:26 PM
Interesting. Hope you do more

9/24/23, 4:21 PM
@Jonanator I’m hoping to do more installments if I can, but October is looking like it’s gonna be a busy month for me. I will do my best though, I have plenty of ideas for more!
9/23/23, 1:17 AM
Wow! Good Halloween story!

9/24/23, 4:20 PM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) Thanks!! Gotta love spooky season!
9/23/23, 7:57 AM
Nice story! :)

9/24/23, 4:19 PM
@[Hypno-Tales](/user/show/70383) Thank you so much!
9/24/23, 12:46 AM
Really creative. And very powerful writing in the diner.

9/24/23, 4:18 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Thank you 🙏
9/24/23, 2:47 PM
Very impressive. I am definitely going to be looking out for future stories from you.

9/24/23, 4:18 PM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Thank you so much! I have another ongoing series called “Keepers.” And I make video content as well, which you can check out on my Twitter if you want @TrancemanOF
9/24/23, 4:07 PM
Time for Chester to really 'fuck-up' Bryan [????] If he really hates Bryan, he should change him into all the things that Bryan now hates, perhaps making him Chesters best friend [as they both should start to think alike ?] Love to see a formally 'good' character become really perverted !!!