Recent Comments

9/22/23, 6:51 PM
Love your stories! Hoping Hatim gets to top some of these contestants--loved your Christmas muzak "toys" chapter. Definitely see the frat bro getting turned into a bottom. Looking forward to next chapters!

9/24/23, 4:23 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Aw, a blast from the past! Still one of my favorite stories.
9/22/23, 4:55 PM
Very exciting start! Hoping if Charlie loses at some point that the nipples come into play lol

9/24/23, 4:23 PM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) I have to imagine if he loses, that'll be part of it!
9/22/23, 5:05 AM
I love your writing so much! Always wildly inventive and clever and extremely hot and sexy. I'm very excited to see where this story goes. And thank you for all of the entertainment and pleasure you've given me and all your readers.

9/24/23, 4:22 PM
@[Anton729](/user/show/928205) Thanks! I'm interested to see how everyone votes...
9/22/23, 5:26 PM
Interesting. Hope you do more

9/24/23, 4:21 PM
@Jonanator I’m hoping to do more installments if I can, but October is looking like it’s gonna be a busy month for me. I will do my best though, I have plenty of ideas for more!
9/23/23, 1:17 AM
Wow! Good Halloween story!

9/24/23, 4:20 PM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) Thanks!! Gotta love spooky season!
9/23/23, 7:57 AM
Nice story! :)

9/24/23, 4:19 PM
@[Hypno-Tales](/user/show/70383) Thank you so much!
9/24/23, 12:46 AM
Really creative. And very powerful writing in the diner.

9/24/23, 4:18 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Thank you 🙏
9/24/23, 2:47 PM
Very impressive. I am definitely going to be looking out for future stories from you.

9/24/23, 4:18 PM
@[Ragnarok](/user/show/14073) Thank you so much! I have another ongoing series called “Keepers.” And I make video content as well, which you can check out on my Twitter if you want @TrancemanOF
9/24/23, 4:07 PM
Time for Chester to really 'fuck-up' Bryan [????] If he really hates Bryan, he should change him into all the things that Bryan now hates, perhaps making him Chesters best friend [as they both should start to think alike ?] Love to see a formally 'good' character become really perverted !!!
nycboot
9/24/23, 10:42 AM
@Edlam's writing is often so amazing with descriptions that suck one in so deeply that you begin to care deeply about fictional characters. And he makes you j/o multiple times. That said, I totally agree with @Zander and feel narrative is Edlam's one major weakness. To me, none of his stories have a satisfying conclusion. And Edlam has explained this previously: He's much more into the chaos than conceiving of a narrative arc. So as hot as I find this story, I know already that if he chooses to end it, that will leave me with more questions and ultimately frustration in that the narrative threads have not reached a satisfying conclusion.

Zander
9/24/23, 12:17 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) like Edlam's story, but I like even more stories in which each plot and characters are developed in a chapter and contain a logical conclusion to the characters' storylines. Personally, for me, Edlam stories are a pleasant cocktail that you can drink and temporarily forget and then re-read someday (they are of course good stories and I like them).But there are stories and authors. For example: Casual Wanderer are excellent stories with a plot, developed characters and very sexy and erotic scenes. ​Which you want to re-read every day and wait for the continuation. Postscript: English is not my native language, I hope I explained everything correctly and did not offend anyone.

9/24/23, 3:43 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) <3 as long as I've got y'all reading, I've done something right. I will say, however, that I'm particularly proud of the narrative that unfolds in this. We aren't even quite to the halfway point right now, but I assure you, I've got an endpoint that creates a full circle (in my mind at least). I'm just happy y'all care enough to even put in critical thinking, lore, and believability!

9/24/23, 3:46 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I feel you on this. [Love Begins at Home](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10001128) by S. Q. Neemie is that for me. I have been re-reading it nearly nonstop since it concluded. He's inspired me deeply to have a more fully rounded narrative with my stories beyond 'and then they all had sex a lot'. In fact, on top of working on Sinfulfillment and the commission I've been hired to write, I've completed a prologue chapter for a continuation of Love Begins at Home that follows the 'Tanner wins' ending. I shared it with Neemie and he enjoyed it too! So hoping to get that out someday as well :P

9/24/23, 3:55 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Dude, dude, dude. Your stuff is great, I too love the chaos. Idk if this makes me sick or something (it doesn’t I follow ridiculous ethics in the real world lol) but I love stories where the bad guy wins, purely because they’re just so rare and such a fresh, exciting perspective. Stories where the good guy wins in the end are often so predictable because our whole lives we’ve grown up with hundreds of pieces of literature and media illustrating ways in which the good guy wins in the end. I like stories where the bad guy wins, where the good guys who you’re genuinely rooting for and want to win lose anyway because 1. It’s hot but mainly 2. You’re much more likely to see a new approach to the bad guy winning because we’re not used to seeing them win. It feels more realistic because yeah, unfortunately, bad guys often win in the real world and it’s a real wake up. My point is, you’re doing great, I love Bryan and Jason and the amazing life they’ve built up and earned, but yeah, I want to see Chester tear it all down for his own perverted motivations because fuck it, it’s fictional, Bryan and Jason aren’t actually real people so do with them what you will. The only time I hate the bad guy winning over the good guys is real life lol, for obvious reasons.