Recent Comments

9/24/23, 11:15 AM
Amazing chapter!
9/24/23, 10:29 AM
One of the more unique stories on this site and a fantastic take on the challenge
9/24/23, 9:41 AM
Hey @Plymouth 58, thanks for the love. Firstly, it's not the end of the story. Secondly, I didn't want to distract from Thor as the cock hungry bottom, and Captain America as a bottom, especially for black cock, is a story that others have done. So I left it to them. There is a story in my collection called The Pills that might give you some idea what I might have written
Zander
9/24/23, 12:25 AM
The only negative of this story for me is that the creatures of chaos that give Chester the power to use desires (too powerful) because they affect all people and not specifically anyone. I understand that this is necessary for the story to move the plot, but there must be entities opposite to the forces chaos, who decided to let Chester change reality at will. There must be forces of Order that monitor such things and correct or stop the forces of Chaos. Therefore, if the same powerful entities like those who help Chester to create Chaos do not appear in history, then in There will be a hole and innuendo in the plot. ​Therefore, if there are beings like those we saw in History who want Chaos, then there must be opposing entities in this universe. And I don't think they'll stand by and watch Chester use those desires for his own selfish and evil purposes. Therefore, it cannot be that some supernatural forces exist, others do not (according to the laws of the genre, such things do not work like that) and one force cannot replace another. ​There must always be a balance.

Swizz
9/24/23, 12:50 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I fear you're overthinking it a bit. And invoking rules from other fictional universes that don't necessarily apply here. Just get your dick out and enjoy the hot story, bro!

9/24/23, 3:00 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) :wink:

Zander
9/24/23, 5:35 AM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) You are right, I always think about the plot first, no matter what the story is) But I like this concept. The chapter, like the whole story as a whole, is good, I even added it to my collection) and enjoyed reading it when it came out, because I love very hot chapters)
9/24/23, 9:05 AM
Daaaamn, it was a good and fun ending, even if the cow scenario would had been very enjoyable too, and that Thor lost his extra weight in this last part. But please don't take me wrong, don't think that's a negative opinion, I'm just saying! I love this story, very good job! It's well written, straight to the point and very hot. That said, you're mean, Sir! You leave me wanting to see that idea of Black Panther, War Machine and Falcon being after Cap America's butt so bad. In few lines, you painted Steve as a horny slut, so I would love to see how he ended up being like that, and his relation(ship?) with those heroes. Or maybe he had always been like that and nobody had noticed it before? Again, so many possibilities!
9/24/23, 7:41 AM
This is an interesting tale. I hope there's more.
Anonymous
9/24/23, 5:38 AM
Holy shit. The updates cannot come as fast as I have. This story is fucking hot. More please 🥺
Anonymous
9/14/23, 2:19 AM
Don't take this the wrong way! Did you even try to edit this story? It so f'ing sloppy. If you want people to read your stuff, you gotta do some work. Run the Spell Check and Grammar Check. It's simple.

9/24/23, 5:29 AM
@Anonymous Yeah I'm actually going to change this chapter a bit but I'm also going to fix it all in word so the Grammer and spelling are better.
9/24/23, 5:01 AM
So hot!! Love it
9/24/23, 3:21 AM
You know exactly where to end it to make the chapter incredibly hot but also make us crave what we know is coming next!