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9/23/23, 9:06 PM
Oh my god, incredible as usual. Seeing little John submit in this way is incredibly exciting, can't wait to read his incredible journey.
9/23/23, 8:50 PM
Johnny Football, a new look at a Parker brother. You have done it again, Jack. I'm hooked on another story. Thank you and know that you are not just an author but a god of an author.
CwbyMstr
11/4/22, 1:38 PM
Wish I could fi d a good submissive BOY to service my boots.

9/23/23, 8:30 PM
@CwbyMstr Yeah man would love to! Hit me up!
Chasm
9/23/23, 7:47 PM
Eagerly awaiting the next part!! This is incredibly hot and your writing is so juicy 🤤

9/23/23, 8:17 PM
@Chasm Thank you! I welcome any tips/suggestions!
9/23/23, 8:16 PM
Awesome chapter, I enjoyed it immensely.
9/7/23, 1:38 AM
Wow. I got shivers reading this. I've had a lot of fantasies about my brother in law who stayed at our place for 6 months in our spare bedroom and this story is very close to one of my recurring fantasies. He wasn't a mess but he was a god damn tease walking around in only boxers whenever it was just me and him at home. I can't wait for part 2.

9/23/23, 8:15 PM
@[jalils85](/user/show/10041818) Thanks! I would love to hear more about your brother-in-law if you want to chat privately? But yeah, thank you for this comment. Part 2 of this story is still coming, it's just been pushed to the back because of Super Jock Sluts and Adam's Troubles, but I will get around to it before the end of the year.
9/23/23, 8:01 PM
Love this story so far..Sexy as only EdIam can do : but isn't it time for Chester to change Brian's reality as well, perhaps turning him into a totally sick & perverted dirty-minded younger version of Chester?? Making Brian the kind of sleezy sicko[ who actually now admires everything about Chester] & that wants to be what Chester already is including now enjoying mistreating Jason, would be so fucking hot !!!
9/23/23, 7:58 PM
Oh heck yes
9/23/23, 7:05 PM
Such a hot story man. Here’s hoping we still get more parts of this story. I’d love to see the formation of the MC.
Malemann54
9/21/23, 12:07 AM
Great story but once again your use of the English language. When the secretary addresses Julio as Sir Santiago is that a misprint? An American would say Mr. Santiago, even if an English person was addressing a knight it would be Sir First name not Sir family name.

9/23/23, 6:29 PM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) Yeah, I noticed it later. Thank u for the tips as always!! <3