Recent Comments

9/24/23, 9:05 AM
Daaaamn, it was a good and fun ending, even if the cow scenario would had been very enjoyable too, and that Thor lost his extra weight in this last part. But please don't take me wrong, don't think that's a negative opinion, I'm just saying! I love this story, very good job! It's well written, straight to the point and very hot. That said, you're mean, Sir! You leave me wanting to see that idea of Black Panther, War Machine and Falcon being after Cap America's butt so bad. In few lines, you painted Steve as a horny slut, so I would love to see how he ended up being like that, and his relation(ship?) with those heroes. Or maybe he had always been like that and nobody had noticed it before? Again, so many possibilities!
9/24/23, 7:41 AM
This is an interesting tale. I hope there's more.
Anonymous
9/24/23, 5:38 AM
Holy shit. The updates cannot come as fast as I have. This story is fucking hot. More please 🥺
Anonymous
9/14/23, 2:19 AM
Don't take this the wrong way! Did you even try to edit this story? It so f'ing sloppy. If you want people to read your stuff, you gotta do some work. Run the Spell Check and Grammar Check. It's simple.

9/24/23, 5:29 AM
@Anonymous Yeah I'm actually going to change this chapter a bit but I'm also going to fix it all in word so the Grammer and spelling are better.
9/24/23, 5:01 AM
So hot!! Love it
9/24/23, 3:21 AM
You know exactly where to end it to make the chapter incredibly hot but also make us crave what we know is coming next!
nycboot
9/24/23, 1:54 AM
Thanks to the curated lists I found this gem of a story. No ratings, no comments. It's fabulous. Thanks to the author for giving me a sexual and emotional high.
9/24/23, 12:17 AM
Really enjoying this so far. Always love the gameshow trope.
9/23/23, 11:05 PM
This was an enjoyable read, good points and ideas. Although I have missed a little more description of the characters, something that more vividly paints the appearance of each character, their characteristics, how they look, how they dress, what they feel and think, etc, in more detail. And perhaps a slower and more progressive development, I felt that father and son reconciled too quickly, I would have liked to see how after drinking the barista's coffee, little by little the tension between them begins to crack and melt, with them confused by their feelings before reaching a climax. But those are just suggestions, I really enjoyed your story, I hope to read more of your stories.
9/23/23, 9:06 PM
Oh my god, incredible as usual. Seeing little John submit in this way is incredibly exciting, can't wait to read his incredible journey.