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9/24/23, 12:17 AM
Really enjoying this so far. Always love the gameshow trope.
9/23/23, 11:05 PM
This was an enjoyable read, good points and ideas. Although I have missed a little more description of the characters, something that more vividly paints the appearance of each character, their characteristics, how they look, how they dress, what they feel and think, etc, in more detail. And perhaps a slower and more progressive development, I felt that father and son reconciled too quickly, I would have liked to see how after drinking the barista's coffee, little by little the tension between them begins to crack and melt, with them confused by their feelings before reaching a climax. But those are just suggestions, I really enjoyed your story, I hope to read more of your stories.
9/23/23, 9:06 PM
Oh my god, incredible as usual. Seeing little John submit in this way is incredibly exciting, can't wait to read his incredible journey.
9/23/23, 8:50 PM
Johnny Football, a new look at a Parker brother. You have done it again, Jack. I'm hooked on another story. Thank you and know that you are not just an author but a god of an author.
CwbyMstr
11/4/22, 1:38 PM
Wish I could fi d a good submissive BOY to service my boots.

9/23/23, 8:30 PM
@CwbyMstr Yeah man would love to! Hit me up!
Chasm
9/23/23, 7:47 PM
Eagerly awaiting the next part!! This is incredibly hot and your writing is so juicy 🤤

9/23/23, 8:17 PM
@Chasm Thank you! I welcome any tips/suggestions!
9/23/23, 8:16 PM
Awesome chapter, I enjoyed it immensely.
9/7/23, 1:38 AM
Wow. I got shivers reading this. I've had a lot of fantasies about my brother in law who stayed at our place for 6 months in our spare bedroom and this story is very close to one of my recurring fantasies. He wasn't a mess but he was a god damn tease walking around in only boxers whenever it was just me and him at home. I can't wait for part 2.

9/23/23, 8:15 PM
@[jalils85](/user/show/10041818) Thanks! I would love to hear more about your brother-in-law if you want to chat privately? But yeah, thank you for this comment. Part 2 of this story is still coming, it's just been pushed to the back because of Super Jock Sluts and Adam's Troubles, but I will get around to it before the end of the year.
9/23/23, 8:01 PM
Love this story so far..Sexy as only EdIam can do : but isn't it time for Chester to change Brian's reality as well, perhaps turning him into a totally sick & perverted dirty-minded younger version of Chester?? Making Brian the kind of sleezy sicko[ who actually now admires everything about Chester] & that wants to be what Chester already is including now enjoying mistreating Jason, would be so fucking hot !!!
9/23/23, 7:58 PM
Oh heck yes