Recent Comments

9/22/23, 8:38 AM
This was good. Gonna be honest though, Renee and Damon both deserve better than Quinn/Alexander. And Quinn is clearly going through some shit And Betsy was right, Alexander is a dick.
9/22/23, 8:13 AM
Hey Cris, I haven't read part 2 yet, but I just wanted to say this story is a fucking gem in a hay barel. If there's one niche type of hypno/S-toG story I love it's when an actor gets lost in character that they basically suffer a psychological break. Maybe I like it because generally speaking the hypnosis and MC takes a back seat in these types of stories. Excited to read part 2!
9/22/23, 6:26 AM
I hope there is more.
9/22/23, 4:05 AM
I really miss you :smiling_face_with_tear:
9/22/23, 3:52 AM
I really miss you :smiling_face_with_tear: You are the best writer in my heart :heart:
9/22/23, 2:41 AM
You're a master of your craft, my friend.
9/22/23, 1:40 AM
So glad you are backk
9/22/23, 1:39 AM
So glad you are back
Lampshade15
9/22/23, 12:25 AM
Off to a very intriguing start. Looking forward to reading about Hatim and Ari(& his stepdad?) the most! Although I don't mind a good, uptight, suited executive either...

9/22/23, 12:32 AM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Be sure to vote! It’s the only democratic way to know who should get it in the end. So to speak.
9/22/23, 12:20 AM
Great Introduction. I'm not rooting for any participant at the moment, but, the presenter announced five participants and at the end he reveals that there will be six. Typing error or some surprise coming? Either way, I'll be eagerly awaiting more episodes. PS: You wrote Hatim as "Hakim" twice. What is his correct name?

9/22/23, 12:31 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Ooh, clever catch on the numbers! Can’t pull the proverbial wool over your eyes, can I. And it’s Hatim! An unfortunate autocorrect that will be amended.