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9/17/23, 4:48 PM
I really love the turning on its head of the "dumbed down jock" trope you're doing here, and I fanboi enough about how I love all your series, though this is no exception.

9/20/23, 1:23 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks! It's an idea I've had a long time. Might have more than one story about being fucked smarter in me. I think it can hit some of the same notes as the more traditional dumbing down trope.
9/19/23, 4:48 AM
Such a great blend of madness, humor and horny sexiness! I’m hooked. And also: can I get this AI too? 🥺

9/20/23, 1:21 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Don't worry, pretty soon W.B. will be on everybody's phone. And computer. And smart-speaker... :wink:
Elm
9/20/23, 11:45 AM
I loved it! So so very good! I imagine the new recruit is behind it all, turning all the men into what they should be, round, bearish, manly and dumb.
Sep 15, 2023
Joe
9/20/23, 11:24 AM
Great story I hope you write more chapters.
9/20/23, 7:18 AM
Excellent, brilliant. Love it. Cant wait for Grandpa Ken to be bought into the fold and yes maybe Mom and Grandma could be happy together and leave the boys alone. The wedding rings should be used in a new marriage ceremony perhaps....
9/20/23, 6:48 AM
Brilliant, cant wait for grandpa and Grandma to be enslaved...
9/20/23, 6:31 AM
I loved this story and being called Mitch made it very exciting for me to read. I am married and would have loved this to have happened to me. Best story so far.
9/20/23, 5:14 AM
Well, it's good to hear that NG5 is a major inspiration for this work. It's drawing me in for your depiction of the boys as having some agency and some willingness to be conditioned. I look forward to seeing how you build upon that as the story proceeds.
Sebastián Apollo
5/17/23, 12:01 AM
Another great installment, Charlie! A nice change of pace too, and it's nice to see some of the same events from someone else's point of view, especially someone as close to Luke as Sammy. I'm also loving how casual and nonchalant the other bros on the baseball team are about Sammy's crush on Luke. Brilliant work!
9/20/23, 2:51 AM
Yes! The sequel we needed! I like his methods here, and I must say I'm curious how the captain broke in the other members. I also do wonder why he took so long for our knight, especially since he seemed the most reticent to really embrace the pirate life. That said, this chapter was great! I can't wait to see what comes of having such value in the cargo hold now, and if the captain even realizes exactly what loot he's got.