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9/18/23, 8:22 PM
Lol...these are literally the longest days of our lives for now :laughing: finally the afternoon came, now another long wait before the next day...haha! I can feel the depravity momentum on the cusp of a meteoric jump...looking forward for the next bit! I know you've already written it all out, but just a thought that came up...I was thinking it'd be more evil and would drive Bryan crazier if he's still the only one who sees all the "reality" but he could only express himself in the same way of the altered world (i.e. he's fuming at all of Jason's harrassments, but what comes out of his mouth and expressions would only be in line with Chester's 'reality') or he could not insult or say anything negative about Chester. He'd be stuck in his own body and forced to play along in Chester's new world.
James
9/18/23, 5:44 PM
God, I hope we hear more on Pete and Sammy as well as Eden Academy. I'll submit to Sammy Parker any time he wants.

9/18/23, 6:35 PM
@[James](/user/show/10038078) We aren't done with these two yet.
9/16/23, 5:06 PM
An incredible ending, every chapter you release is a wonder. I'm happy for sammy and pete, wish they stay together . (I secretly hope now we can see John's way or Eli’s 🫣)

9/18/23, 6:35 PM
@[Angel πŸ˜‡](/user/show/10027188) Funny you say that, the next story is John's...stay tuned.
9/16/23, 2:04 PM
Wow. Just wow. Well fucking done. πŸ–€

9/18/23, 6:35 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Aww thanks bud
hairyartist
9/16/23, 2:03 PM
Thank you for an awesome conclusion to this great story!

9/18/23, 6:34 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks man, glad you liked it.
9/16/23, 12:44 PM
Mav did is job! Pete is safe. Sammy is safe. You made a perfect ending to a virtual fairy tale where all's well the ends well. Thank you, Jack, for another great series. I only hope that this isn't the end of Sammy and Pete. I'm rooting for them like a major soccer match. Jack, you are the Master. We adore you.

9/18/23, 6:34 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Awww....thanks man, you've been with Sammy since the start! So that means a lot.
9/16/23, 9:49 AM
I was invested in Sammy finding a way to submit and he enjoyed it so much more than I hoped. It was a great wrap up to their story. Just what is Eden? Love this world you've made and how you tie things together. Thanks for yet another great series.

9/18/23, 6:34 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks man, I am so glad you liked the journey :)
9/18/23, 2:37 PM
oh YES!
9/18/23, 2:32 PM
What a masterpiece! Can’t wait for more. Thank you for the great story!
9/2/23, 3:52 AM
Great one. Yes, I do sometimes think about becoming one of them. May be now after 1000 years, Males that volunteer for a new test program, they are not Aggressors. this new test program allows the male to be consciousness, in the lab. The alien species, now want to check and see now the program is going.

9/2/23, 3:33 PM
@[robbotg99x4you](/user/show/141754) It's a good idea but one that (I feel) is beyond my abilities to write. When I think of the aliens in this story, I think of aliens depicted in the movie "Arrival". Their method of communicating, and their overall depiction is so far beyond our understanding. I think that when they initially contacted the human race, it was very much "You will fall in line or be destroyed." There were no if, and or buts about it. There is no wriggle room. There will is absolute. So having conversations with them is not really an option. It's like approaching a God. Every time you do, your existence is on the line. So the general rule would be: avoid them at all costs. I probably didn't make that clear in the story. Lt. Tak would have no idea about this, so it was really impossible to include these details. There was no way to say that the alien organisms that are attached to the human body are not the same aliens that control the galaxy. The body organisms are genetically bred by the ruling class aliens. Think of the ruling aliens as cattle ranchers. The humans are the livestock. And the aliens have created organic, living yokes, harnesses and tools to keep the human livestock in line.

9/18/23, 1:43 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Well all I was thinking was another story. Years late, with similar theme or things, as in rubber and drones or robots, that was it.