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7/28/23, 5:13 PM
Cundo descubrí esta página tus historias fueron de las primeras que leí, prácticamente todas tus historias me gustan a excepción de esta ... muy cliché algo que esperaría de alguien muy nuevo escribiendo, la escenas de sexo estan bien pero el protagonista es demasiado cliché y estereotipico

9/18/23, 10:01 PM
@[Artic](/user/show/10027055) that's disheartening to hear but glad you enjoy my other work.
9/18/23, 8:22 PM
Lol...these are literally the longest days of our lives for now :laughing: finally the afternoon came, now another long wait before the next day...haha! I can feel the depravity momentum on the cusp of a meteoric jump...looking forward for the next bit! I know you've already written it all out, but just a thought that came up...I was thinking it'd be more evil and would drive Bryan crazier if he's still the only one who sees all the "reality" but he could only express himself in the same way of the altered world (i.e. he's fuming at all of Jason's harrassments, but what comes out of his mouth and expressions would only be in line with Chester's 'reality') or he could not insult or say anything negative about Chester. He'd be stuck in his own body and forced to play along in Chester's new world.
James
9/18/23, 5:44 PM
God, I hope we hear more on Pete and Sammy as well as Eden Academy. I'll submit to Sammy Parker any time he wants.

9/18/23, 6:35 PM
@[James](/user/show/10038078) We aren't done with these two yet.
9/16/23, 5:06 PM
An incredible ending, every chapter you release is a wonder. I'm happy for sammy and pete, wish they stay together . (I secretly hope now we can see John's way or Eli’s 🫣)

9/18/23, 6:35 PM
@[Angel 😇](/user/show/10027188) Funny you say that, the next story is John's...stay tuned.
9/16/23, 2:04 PM
Wow. Just wow. Well fucking done. 🖤

9/18/23, 6:35 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Aww thanks bud
hairyartist
9/16/23, 2:03 PM
Thank you for an awesome conclusion to this great story!

9/18/23, 6:34 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks man, glad you liked it.
9/16/23, 12:44 PM
Mav did is job! Pete is safe. Sammy is safe. You made a perfect ending to a virtual fairy tale where all's well the ends well. Thank you, Jack, for another great series. I only hope that this isn't the end of Sammy and Pete. I'm rooting for them like a major soccer match. Jack, you are the Master. We adore you.

9/18/23, 6:34 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Awww....thanks man, you've been with Sammy since the start! So that means a lot.
9/16/23, 9:49 AM
I was invested in Sammy finding a way to submit and he enjoyed it so much more than I hoped. It was a great wrap up to their story. Just what is Eden? Love this world you've made and how you tie things together. Thanks for yet another great series.

9/18/23, 6:34 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks man, I am so glad you liked the journey :)
9/18/23, 2:37 PM
oh YES!
9/18/23, 2:32 PM
What a masterpiece! Can’t wait for more. Thank you for the great story!