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9/16/23, 9:49 AM
I was invested in Sammy finding a way to submit and he enjoyed it so much more than I hoped. It was a great wrap up to their story. Just what is Eden? Love this world you've made and how you tie things together. Thanks for yet another great series.

9/18/23, 6:34 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks man, I am so glad you liked the journey :)
9/18/23, 2:37 PM
oh YES!
9/18/23, 2:32 PM
What a masterpiece! Can’t wait for more. Thank you for the great story!
9/2/23, 3:52 AM
Great one. Yes, I do sometimes think about becoming one of them. May be now after 1000 years, Males that volunteer for a new test program, they are not Aggressors. this new test program allows the male to be consciousness, in the lab. The alien species, now want to check and see now the program is going.

9/2/23, 3:33 PM
@[robbotg99x4you](/user/show/141754) It's a good idea but one that (I feel) is beyond my abilities to write. When I think of the aliens in this story, I think of aliens depicted in the movie "Arrival". Their method of communicating, and their overall depiction is so far beyond our understanding. I think that when they initially contacted the human race, it was very much "You will fall in line or be destroyed." There were no if, and or buts about it. There is no wriggle room. There will is absolute. So having conversations with them is not really an option. It's like approaching a God. Every time you do, your existence is on the line. So the general rule would be: avoid them at all costs. I probably didn't make that clear in the story. Lt. Tak would have no idea about this, so it was really impossible to include these details. There was no way to say that the alien organisms that are attached to the human body are not the same aliens that control the galaxy. The body organisms are genetically bred by the ruling class aliens. Think of the ruling aliens as cattle ranchers. The humans are the livestock. And the aliens have created organic, living yokes, harnesses and tools to keep the human livestock in line.

9/18/23, 1:43 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Well all I was thinking was another story. Years late, with similar theme or things, as in rubber and drones or robots, that was it.
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9/18/23, 12:34 PM
Excellent
9/18/23, 10:58 AM
This was a hot story! Just a note that Doug and Brent were first introduced as Doug and Carmen, so it was confusing at first, but overall still a good read!
9/18/23, 9:24 AM
I liked this story but I wish it came from Mitch’s perspective instead of his wife’s.
9/16/23, 10:23 PM
Hot concept, hot execution EXCEPT when Ethan gives Danny a lisp and he says "Dathy" bc that's not how lisps work and it always breaks the spell for me when an author does it. Everything else was A+

9/18/23, 7:09 AM
@[Curiosity](/user/show/407183) Thanks man, I'll keep that in mind for thr future. I'm pleased you liked it apart from thag
9/17/23, 8:38 AM
(Obviously) I love a good stage show story! Looking forward to seeing where the rest goes!

9/17/23, 11:59 AM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) Haha I hope you enjoy! I LOVE your stories! I hope you write more soon! "Internet Famous" and "Mike The Somnambulist" are two of my favorite stories of all time! :sweat_smile:

9/18/23, 6:07 AM
@[HappyTrance](/user/show/10003816) Thanks! Doesn't surprise me given this! Wish I could keep cranking them out at that rate. Maybe more one day...!
9/18/23, 6:05 AM
Excelente cariño