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9/19/23, 4:59 PM
this is really good. can't wait for the ending
9/19/23, 4:24 PM
Grazie di nuovo per aver portato avanti con questa serie, una delle migliori sul sito. L'andamento della trama era perfetta, poi il dialogo ottimo per sviluppare i personaggi. Mi è piaciuta molto la svolta finale con il bracciale e la scomparsa di Circe, rendendo Nico un agente leale nei confronti di Marcus. Chissà che combinerà, adesso che lui ha potenziato la sua magia e comanda una caserma di carabinieri! Casomai scrivessi capitoli in più saremmo ancora una volta i tuoi beneficiari!

Yoshi
9/19/23, 4:32 PM
@[TSquared](/user/show/968206) grazie mille per i tuoi commenti sotto ogni capitolo, mi hanno tenuto un po' di compagnia. Sono contento che la storia ti sia piaciuta ma come ho detto la storia di Marcus non finisce di certo qua, la mia nuova serie (chissà se collegata a questa?:wink:) è già cominciata e ha già due capitoli, la trovi o nella home o sul mio profilo con il titolo "The Carabinieri Academy" spero ti piaccia e come sempre buona lettura. Aspetto i tuoi commenti:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Martin
8/13/23, 1:55 PM
Now THAT'S an amazing twist... PLEASE continue this. This has the potential to become one of my favorite series on the whole site!

Anonymous
9/19/23, 3:44 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Agreed!
Zander
9/19/23, 2:34 PM
The idea is not bad, but events unfold too quickly. And I wish the chapter was a little longer. Otherwise, everything is pretty well written for the first time.
9/19/23, 6:13 AM
No se porque me imagino que el Amo es un poco chaparro, no mucho, pero no es más alto que Rafa jaja xD
Anonymous
9/19/23, 1:09 AM
Hot story but I also wish the story was told from the man’s perspective. I personally prefer it when female characters don’t play a big role in stories on this site.
9/17/23, 2:36 AM
I am always amazed when I read erotica that stems from really imaginative ideas. Somehow, you, sir, keep inducing braingasms in me. Please. Don't. Stop...!

9/19/23, 12:45 AM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) I have at least a few more ideas waiting.
9/17/23, 2:08 AM
Love this series so much! I admittedly cackle along with Diego as his mad scientist arc develops…

9/19/23, 12:44 AM
@[n_scriptus](/user/show/1803818) Thanks!
9/17/23, 4:33 PM
Holy crap! I don't even know where to begin. As a reader your stories pull me in. From the comments I'm reading here I dare say I am not alone in that regard. Using the language of Eden its far to say I submit my mind and let your narrative take where it leads. That happens because your characters are compelling. It happens because you deal with real questions we all face regarding how we feel about women and other men when we're attracted to either, wrestle with thar, and continue to do so without real resolution. And of course you nail telling the story of our coming to terms with hierarchical situations and where we fit in. Across the board its perfection dude. And what is Eden about? Counting on you to let us know. You are MASTER story teller.

9/18/23, 6:35 PM
@[Currious](/user/show/10009075) Thanks man, I'm dancing as fast as I can.

9/19/23, 12:29 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) You're welcome! And please know every story you write is worth waiting for. More so than any other author across any of the platforms offering content in this genre a Jack Parker story is the tops.
9/18/23, 1:28 PM
Bro fuck Eli is the last one I would've imagined getting turned, so I'm so glad he was such a struggle! He deserves this though, letting his faith deny him the pleasure he so wanted and needed, I'm glad he got corrupted and was given such huge gifts! I can't wait for Romeo to join~

9/18/23, 1:54 PM
@[Nixalpad19](/user/show/10034856) Every couple paragraphs I was like, “okay I think he’s corrupt enough now,” before deciding he deserves a little more attention 😜

9/18/23, 11:48 PM
@[BateSeeker](/user/show/235651) How on-theme for the story. Greedy for more corruption. (Hmm, must have messed up. This was meant to be in reply to your comment to Nixalpad19) Another great chapter. The resistance, even to the point of impressing the demon, was excellent. But, alas, futile. The fall into greedy pleasure was delicious. Slimy cock docking and pumping cum into him was unexpected but incredibly hot. I love your interpretations of the sins and their demon counterparts with how they enact those traits on their thrall. Wrath will be an interesting one and perhaps tricky. I have every confidence in your writing to make it both hot and narrative. Can't wait for more of your work.

9/19/23, 12:16 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you! I’ve been looking forward to these chapters since I started this series. I really hope I can do them justice.