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9/16/23, 2:17 PM
How sad that Anthony, Thomas, and an abused staff were further stricken with suffering after all they had already borne. 😟

9/16/23, 3:55 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Don't worry. All will become clear. Sonetimes things have to get worse before they get better. And we'll understand why Ethel cursed them. I'll leave it there for now.
9/16/23, 3:35 PM
A very promising start, now let's see that twink get completely obliterated

9/16/23, 3:37 PM
@[Timet](/user/show/2640172) The next chapter is already on its way! I think you won't be disappointed!~
9/16/23, 3:15 PM
That was an amazing opening, so hot and I cant wait to read the next part. Keep it up!
9/16/23, 2:23 PM
The sign of a top writer is if a story he writes is better on a subsequent readr. It was true of this great chapter as it has been of other of your stories I have read. I look forward to Sammy's journey with his coach Pete.
9/16/23, 1:54 PM
I hope Jack corrupts his dad.
Anonymous
9/16/23, 12:53 PM
Excellent
9/16/23, 12:16 PM
Tuesday, Part 2? :sweat_smile:
9/16/23, 6:24 AM
Quite a ride, Jack! I love seeing the evolution of your characters and how threads of your different stories are woven together. Hats off!
Sep 15, 2023
9/16/23, 6:01 AM
It takes a great talent to right a story this good, that also makes me want to be in the story. I really hope you keep going with this setting, because I think you have a great start to a lot of really great stories here.