Recent Comments

9/15/23, 7:57 AM
For a series that halfway through its story was cooling down, running in circles and even losing its senses, this ending was incredible. Very good indeed. The last two chapters were very agile, objective and included epic battles of magic and a very interesting ending that leaves room for a sequel. I'm already looking forward to the next "season".

Yoshi
9/15/23, 8:11 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) thank you so much for the comment, I would like to know which parts or chapters you found redundant or not well developed in order to improve my writing skills. It's the first time I've written such a long story so I still have a lot to improve and learn but I'm glad you liked it overall. P.s the first episode of the new series has already been published "The Carabinieri Academy", enjoy reading
9/15/23, 6:28 AM
Hope there won't be too long a wait for the next part. The suspense is killing me!
9/15/23, 3:59 AM
Fuck perfect chapter man! This was everything I wanted and more!! I vote 2 and 3!!
9/15/23, 3:38 AM
Thanks! And yes, my writing does deserve more praise, he he. Thanks for telling everyone! Two more chapters I think
9/15/23, 3:36 AM
Cada vez mas atrevido el chico... aunq la vdd me quede con ganas de saber mas en forma que le paso al papá :P aunque parece que habra mas al respecto en el proximo cap :3
9/15/23, 3:32 AM
A hot, hot story.
Chasm
9/15/23, 3:24 AM
Absolutely love your writing. You manage to make Travis’s transformation sound so appealing as he submits to black cock. This chapter was even better than the last. I don’t know how many more chapters you plan to write but I know however Travis ends up, I’ll enjoy it. Thank you for an incredibly hot story, this series and your writing deserves far more praise.
9/15/23, 3:20 AM
Wow, that's a lot of interest in the story, thanks everyone! I think I was unclear. GSS has a nifty "Choose-your-own-adventure" type branching-paths option to use for stories such as this. I have already written all 3 of the outcomes. I will post all 3 of them together after I finish editing, and you will get to chose which of the 3 to read. (Or you can read all 3 ;) )