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9/13/23, 11:43 AM
Gratuitious, but SO FUCKING HOT. the unapologetic dominance that goes on here. I am hooked! i cannot wait to see what else you do with this story!

9/15/23, 1:50 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) :wink:
9/13/23, 11:41 AM
LOVED the way you used this part of the story to really hammer home Jafar's power over the sultan. SO hot. though i kept flipping back and forth between the Live and animated versions because the live sultan is hotter to imagine with the live jafar over the tiny man where he looks mostly like a ball.

9/15/23, 1:50 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) Thanks, looking back at the scene years later where Jafar hypnotizes the Sultan (aka, the ball ;)) it's nuts how homo-erotic it is, thanks for reading me exorcising those scenes rather than just being teased by them.
9/13/23, 11:39 AM
i just found this story and i HAD to go through it. Jafar is one of my favorite villains to root for and it's just so obvious that he story had to cheat for the heroes to even have a chance of winning. LOVED this chapter where we establish Jafar's power over all the guards, highlighting the captain, but i keep mentally flipping between the animated versions and the live versions of the characters. i cannot wait for the whole story that goes through the whole movie! i feel like you'd do a FAR better job of it.

9/15/23, 1:48 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) :innocent:
8/30/23, 3:37 PM
a note on vocabulary : "crone" isn't a generic term for old people, it's only for females, so it doesn't fit in the context of Jafar.

9/15/23, 1:46 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Thanks! I'll be mindful of that now.
9/15/23, 1:31 PM
Hi everyone! Sorry for the delay in getting this out. I got distracted with some major life events. I will be coming back to this series shortly to complete it. Thank you for your patience!
9/15/23, 12:18 PM
i got so involved... THANK YOU! GREAT fun
Anonymous
9/15/23, 11:08 AM
We’ll done! You have a gift. It’s truly an original piece. Good luck with the next stage. Looking forward to reading it. Best.MH
Anonymous
9/2/23, 2:28 PM
New Chapter this month?

9/3/23, 6:17 AM
@Anonymous Yes. There will be.

Anonymous
9/8/23, 11:07 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Can you give an exact date?🥺

Anonymous
9/14/23, 4:41 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Will the next chapter be in the end of the month or earlier?

9/14/23, 11:04 PM
@Anonymous Hi. I’m pretty busy at the moment so it might have to be by the end of the month.

Anonymous
9/15/23, 10:30 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) No problem, thanks for the great work! Please continue and hope that everything goes smoothly in your end ;)
9/15/23, 7:57 AM
For a series that halfway through its story was cooling down, running in circles and even losing its senses, this ending was incredible. Very good indeed. The last two chapters were very agile, objective and included epic battles of magic and a very interesting ending that leaves room for a sequel. I'm already looking forward to the next "season".

Yoshi
9/15/23, 8:11 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) thank you so much for the comment, I would like to know which parts or chapters you found redundant or not well developed in order to improve my writing skills. It's the first time I've written such a long story so I still have a lot to improve and learn but I'm glad you liked it overall. P.s the first episode of the new series has already been published "The Carabinieri Academy", enjoy reading