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9/15/23, 3:59 AM
Fuck perfect chapter man! This was everything I wanted and more!! I vote 2 and 3!!
9/15/23, 3:38 AM
Thanks! And yes, my writing does deserve more praise, he he. Thanks for telling everyone! Two more chapters I think
9/15/23, 3:36 AM
Cada vez mas atrevido el chico... aunq la vdd me quede con ganas de saber mas en forma que le paso al papá :P aunque parece que habra mas al respecto en el proximo cap :3
9/15/23, 3:32 AM
A hot, hot story.
Chasm
9/15/23, 3:24 AM
Absolutely love your writing. You manage to make Travis’s transformation sound so appealing as he submits to black cock. This chapter was even better than the last. I don’t know how many more chapters you plan to write but I know however Travis ends up, I’ll enjoy it. Thank you for an incredibly hot story, this series and your writing deserves far more praise.
9/15/23, 3:20 AM
Wow, that's a lot of interest in the story, thanks everyone! I think I was unclear. GSS has a nifty "Choose-your-own-adventure" type branching-paths option to use for stories such as this. I have already written all 3 of the outcomes. I will post all 3 of them together after I finish editing, and you will get to chose which of the 3 to read. (Or you can read all 3 ;) )
9/14/23, 2:18 PM
Absolutely option #1. If there's a second choice, option #3 as well!

9/15/23, 2:57 AM
I agree with @[Terinas Tiger](/user/show/77652): option #1. If there’s a second choice, option #3
9/15/23, 2:44 AM
I've read both chapters of this so many times this week waiting eagerly for chapter 3!
BearBoi
9/15/23, 1:50 AM
Faggification of jocks is more interesting than further jockification of dudes who are already jocks, so, 1. If the other two were nerdy twinks first who got jockified, though, then that'd be better.
Sep 14, 2023
9/14/23, 11:24 PM
This was a lot of fun to read, especially the line "as if in an example of bad comic book writing." Thanks for sharing it.

9/15/23, 1:33 AM
@[Wrestlr](/user/show/1233047) And thank YOU for spotting and commenting on that. I couldn't resist including it and some other bad jokes.