Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/2/23, 2:28 PM
New Chapter this month?

9/3/23, 6:17 AM
@Anonymous Yes. There will be.

Anonymous
9/8/23, 11:07 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Can you give an exact date?🥺

Anonymous
9/14/23, 4:41 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Will the next chapter be in the end of the month or earlier?

9/14/23, 11:04 PM
@Anonymous Hi. I’m pretty busy at the moment so it might have to be by the end of the month.

Anonymous
9/15/23, 10:30 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) No problem, thanks for the great work! Please continue and hope that everything goes smoothly in your end ;)
9/15/23, 7:57 AM
For a series that halfway through its story was cooling down, running in circles and even losing its senses, this ending was incredible. Very good indeed. The last two chapters were very agile, objective and included epic battles of magic and a very interesting ending that leaves room for a sequel. I'm already looking forward to the next "season".

Yoshi
9/15/23, 8:11 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) thank you so much for the comment, I would like to know which parts or chapters you found redundant or not well developed in order to improve my writing skills. It's the first time I've written such a long story so I still have a lot to improve and learn but I'm glad you liked it overall. P.s the first episode of the new series has already been published "The Carabinieri Academy", enjoy reading
9/15/23, 6:28 AM
Hope there won't be too long a wait for the next part. The suspense is killing me!
9/15/23, 3:59 AM
Fuck perfect chapter man! This was everything I wanted and more!! I vote 2 and 3!!
9/15/23, 3:38 AM
Thanks! And yes, my writing does deserve more praise, he he. Thanks for telling everyone! Two more chapters I think
9/15/23, 3:36 AM
Cada vez mas atrevido el chico... aunq la vdd me quede con ganas de saber mas en forma que le paso al papá :P aunque parece que habra mas al respecto en el proximo cap :3
9/15/23, 3:32 AM
A hot, hot story.
Chasm
9/15/23, 3:24 AM
Absolutely love your writing. You manage to make Travis’s transformation sound so appealing as he submits to black cock. This chapter was even better than the last. I don’t know how many more chapters you plan to write but I know however Travis ends up, I’ll enjoy it. Thank you for an incredibly hot story, this series and your writing deserves far more praise.