Recent Comments

9/14/23, 3:40 AM
Eu ja consegui, gostei da historia, eu gosto mais quando o cara é forçado ou não consegue resistir, mas sempre tentando impedir, mas gostei de qualquer maneira principalmente a parte que ele foi dopado
9/10/23, 3:02 AM
Hot very hot. Slowly going through the details. I can't wait when he make other military men, his devotees. Start with Sanders and then slowly his SEAL team mates. I would love to see how you would conquer the rest of the camp and even the eastern SOF command even into the Pentagon.

9/10/23, 7:46 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Thank you. My plan is to take my time and slowly have Yates walking a tightrope over the abyss and yes things will be happening with Sanders a at least a few members of his Team but as of right now I don't plan on him taking over the military or the like but then the story is still young so...

9/11/23, 3:12 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Sure I think your taking slowly is great! You could also do a spin-off based on different branches to gather more energy.... :D

9/11/23, 4:00 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Having a Ranger make a deal while training at Ranger School would be interesting, or maybe one of the instructors...but I'm slow a writer enough not sure I'd want to add that but we'll see.

9/13/23, 3:57 PM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) No problem. Take your time and make the story that you would love to continue writing; no pressure intended. For those (like me) who loves the military stories, note that there are Special Ops in each of the service arms: - Army: Rangers, Green Berets, Delta (usually from Army) - Marines: Recon/Raiders - Navy: SEALs, SWCC - Airforce: Pararesecue/PJ (see this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_UtM9IAHvoc) - Coast Guards: "A" school (see the movie "The Guardian") Lots of opportunities :D

9/13/23, 11:02 PM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) I do have some other plans for some of the branches. I have an alien drone story planned and partly written for the army so I might just do one story for each, each with a different theme, but making each focus on the Special Ops might be a rather good way to tie them together...
9/12/23, 10:46 PM
did you forget chapter 2 or is it a typo?

9/13/23, 4:37 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Hi billi Thank you for pointing that out. It’s a typo in previously posted chapter since it consisted of a chapter one and chapter two as well.

Martin
9/13/23, 5:24 AM
@[I. Dusk](/user/show/10038753) Did you see the email I've sent you yesterday?

9/13/23, 7:30 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Yes, I got to it just now. I was extremely busy today. Thank you both billi and Martin :)
Blakenikolas
9/13/23, 5:19 PM
Corrupt this town!
Anonymous
9/13/23, 3:22 PM
Can’t wait for the next part!
9/13/23, 2:11 PM
Better and better
9/11/23, 7:17 PM
The first section is quite long. Breaking up any long sections is a good idea.

9/13/23, 7:04 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Ok
Anonymous
9/13/23, 4:27 AM
Awesome...Verrrry HOTTT!!!!
9/11/23, 7:14 PM
I understand. It's your story. I should have said that it would be interesting to see what happens. It is a wonderful stand alone story.

9/11/23, 9:06 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Typically following my previous comment about not continuing this I have had thoughts about just how to do so. The problem is they are so far outside of my comfort range that I am torn between whether it is wise to write something that I would not necessarily choose to read myself, and whether forcing me to do that would potentially be beneficial to my output in the long run.

9/13/23, 4:25 AM
@[Envious George](/user/show/10012614) Even if you don't want to follow this story further I love the idea of this universe and hope to either see more stories set in it or maybe an overview of this society and some more of the roles in it. The collective feels very deep and fleshed out even from this small window
nycboot
9/13/23, 1:09 AM
Years from now, there will be a Modern Library edition of "The works of Rubbrsome." This will fall into the "early works" section. :) So far, sooo very good!

Martin
9/13/23, 4:24 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Funny, I had a similar thought!