Recent Comments

9/14/23, 12:44 PM
would love to see all but 2&3 sound the most fun
9/14/23, 5:33 AM
Presiento que Rafa se va a quebrar muy pronto, y no hablando de su resistencia
9/14/23, 3:40 AM
Eu ja consegui, gostei da historia, eu gosto mais quando o cara é forçado ou não consegue resistir, mas sempre tentando impedir, mas gostei de qualquer maneira principalmente a parte que ele foi dopado
9/10/23, 3:02 AM
Hot very hot. Slowly going through the details. I can't wait when he make other military men, his devotees. Start with Sanders and then slowly his SEAL team mates. I would love to see how you would conquer the rest of the camp and even the eastern SOF command even into the Pentagon.

9/10/23, 7:46 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Thank you. My plan is to take my time and slowly have Yates walking a tightrope over the abyss and yes things will be happening with Sanders a at least a few members of his Team but as of right now I don't plan on him taking over the military or the like but then the story is still young so...

9/11/23, 3:12 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Sure I think your taking slowly is great! You could also do a spin-off based on different branches to gather more energy.... :D

9/11/23, 4:00 AM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) Having a Ranger make a deal while training at Ranger School would be interesting, or maybe one of the instructors...but I'm slow a writer enough not sure I'd want to add that but we'll see.

9/13/23, 3:57 PM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) No problem. Take your time and make the story that you would love to continue writing; no pressure intended. For those (like me) who loves the military stories, note that there are Special Ops in each of the service arms: - Army: Rangers, Green Berets, Delta (usually from Army) - Marines: Recon/Raiders - Navy: SEALs, SWCC - Airforce: Pararesecue/PJ (see this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_UtM9IAHvoc) - Coast Guards: "A" school (see the movie "The Guardian") Lots of opportunities :D

9/13/23, 11:02 PM
@[Scorp_w](/user/show/10006642) I do have some other plans for some of the branches. I have an alien drone story planned and partly written for the army so I might just do one story for each, each with a different theme, but making each focus on the Special Ops might be a rather good way to tie them together...
9/12/23, 10:46 PM
did you forget chapter 2 or is it a typo?

9/13/23, 4:37 AM
@[billi](/user/show/872108) Hi billi Thank you for pointing that out. It’s a typo in previously posted chapter since it consisted of a chapter one and chapter two as well.

Martin
9/13/23, 5:24 AM
@[I. Dusk](/user/show/10038753) Did you see the email I've sent you yesterday?

9/13/23, 7:30 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Yes, I got to it just now. I was extremely busy today. Thank you both billi and Martin :)
Blakenikolas
9/13/23, 5:19 PM
Corrupt this town!
Anonymous
9/13/23, 3:22 PM
Can’t wait for the next part!
9/13/23, 2:11 PM
Better and better