Recent Comments

9/13/23, 1:04 AM
Loving this story so far! Hoping that Straga gets to keep Ezra.
Swizzington
7/26/20, 11:31 PM
Just a quick little thing I whipped up for fun :-) Do people generally enjoy the diary/journal format? They're quite easy to write so I'm thinking I might do a few more in this style.

9/12/23, 9:11 PM
@Swizzington I really enjoy this format

9/13/23, 12:44 AM
@Swizzington Oh, yes, I enjoy it a ton. Epistolaries too!
Sep 10, 2023
9/13/23, 12:34 AM
exactly what i needed, thank you
9/12/23, 4:32 PM
Surprisingly good series. I randomly clicked on 1st part and stayed till here. Good job

9/12/23, 10:42 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I'm glad you are enjoying it!
9/12/23, 8:46 PM
I have to agree with Hypnothrill; that the whole scene of Troy's escape was hot. For me I'm always turned on by the communal aspect of hypnosis and mind control and you were able to do that very well. The whole groupthink of wanting to go back to the spiral and group mastrubation really has been something I strive to put in my writing; to see you do it is a big inspiration for me.
9/12/23, 8:21 PM
I'm still loving this series! The scene with Troy trying to convince them to escape while the narrator and the other boys just want to return to the spiral was incredibly hot.
9/11/23, 8:55 PM
Amazing! I hope this series continues.

9/11/23, 10:39 PM
@[Hypnosubboi92](/user/show/10017257) Well ... there will be one more chapter. But I like to think that The Brethren are still out there ... looking for their next recruit.

9/12/23, 8:20 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Hint for a Sequel hehe? What would his best friend say to his new way of live…?
Sep 10, 2023
9/12/23, 8:15 PM
I really dug the idea of this story and the transformation you wrote. I hope a lot more guys find their destiny as chubby dudes who love other chubby dudes!
Spikeass
9/12/23, 6:30 PM
I. Love your story, turning straight Cop gay. His lucky boy
9/12/23, 3:47 PM
I've always thought that massage and sexual stimulation were a wonderful combination for relaxing the body and the mind, exciting the libido, and potentially opening the subconscious to new ideas. You added to a great idea by introducing the chemical effects of the Lotus flower to further lower inhibitions, ramp up libido, sensitize the senses and mind to male pheromones, open the body and mind to the benefits of bottoming, and induce a tendency to submission. Until now, I haven't seen a lot of stories that make these connections, but you did an amazing job of bringing the idea alive. Thanks for sharing!