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9/12/23, 4:32 PM
Surprisingly good series. I randomly clicked on 1st part and stayed till here. Good job

9/12/23, 10:42 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I'm glad you are enjoying it!
9/12/23, 8:46 PM
I have to agree with Hypnothrill; that the whole scene of Troy's escape was hot. For me I'm always turned on by the communal aspect of hypnosis and mind control and you were able to do that very well. The whole groupthink of wanting to go back to the spiral and group mastrubation really has been something I strive to put in my writing; to see you do it is a big inspiration for me.
9/12/23, 8:21 PM
I'm still loving this series! The scene with Troy trying to convince them to escape while the narrator and the other boys just want to return to the spiral was incredibly hot.
9/11/23, 8:55 PM
Amazing! I hope this series continues.

9/11/23, 10:39 PM
@[Hypnosubboi92](/user/show/10017257) Well ... there will be one more chapter. But I like to think that The Brethren are still out there ... looking for their next recruit.

9/12/23, 8:20 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Hint for a Sequel hehe? What would his best friend say to his new way of live…?
Sep 10, 2023
9/12/23, 8:15 PM
I really dug the idea of this story and the transformation you wrote. I hope a lot more guys find their destiny as chubby dudes who love other chubby dudes!
Spikeass
9/12/23, 6:30 PM
I. Love your story, turning straight Cop gay. His lucky boy
9/12/23, 3:47 PM
I've always thought that massage and sexual stimulation were a wonderful combination for relaxing the body and the mind, exciting the libido, and potentially opening the subconscious to new ideas. You added to a great idea by introducing the chemical effects of the Lotus flower to further lower inhibitions, ramp up libido, sensitize the senses and mind to male pheromones, open the body and mind to the benefits of bottoming, and induce a tendency to submission. Until now, I haven't seen a lot of stories that make these connections, but you did an amazing job of bringing the idea alive. Thanks for sharing!
3/5/23, 9:36 AM
why would he not want this nephew to be like him, remember he is over 18

3/5/23, 9:57 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Where is it written that he is over 18 ? 🤨

9/12/23, 11:05 AM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) The first chapter established that Jackie is only 16.
9/12/23, 10:04 AM
I hadn't checked this story in quite some time, they were a few chapters I had to catch up to. Really cool, everything that happened. Marcus and Sam have quite the cute relationship going on, but seems like there's still a lot that could happen! :)
Feb 28, 2023
3/4/23, 7:14 PM
I really like the idea of transferring height and muscles by nanites. But this story sounds more like a summary than a real story. There are hardly any details, there is no arc of suspense - or drama - in this very short story. I think there might be a loooot of potential in the idea which is hopefully used for other stories.

3/5/23, 11:50 AM
@[ChrisGER](/user/show/10017443) Agreed. I wrote it in a rush and plan to proof this one out and create a whole series of stories.

3/7/23, 7:12 PM
@[jts1!](/user/show/983390) Wow, that's great to hear. Can't wait to read it!

9/12/23, 6:15 AM
@[jts1!](/user/show/983390) Yay looking forward, love the idea!