Recent Comments

Joe
9/11/23, 8:13 PM
Keep the story going. Joe
Sep 10, 2023
9/11/23, 7:12 PM
It looks much better now!
Joe
9/11/23, 7:09 PM
Keep the story going its so hot. Joe
Joe
9/11/23, 7:08 PM
Keep the story going it's so hot. Joe
Anonymous
9/11/23, 5:52 PM
This is INSANELY hot
9/11/23, 4:19 PM
So happy to see this back buddy 🔥
Anonymous
9/11/23, 4:18 PM
Where is next parts of this amazing story sir.
9/11/23, 3:55 PM
Super hot. I hope some of the gooners come back for repeat treatments and follow ups.
2/5/23, 6:34 AM
I liked the story a lot just not the use of 'fag' at the end.

Anonymous
9/11/23, 1:45 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, same.

9/11/23, 1:57 PM
@Anonymous Just to acknowledge, i’ve taken this feedback on board. Some people are okay with the ‘reclamation’ of the word and some aren’t.
9/11/23, 6:35 AM
An incredible finale to peeking in on Charlie after he got the 'curse'. The fuckbuddy curse is awesome. It's both wholesome and holesome. I loved the changes you made to his friend group and how eagerly they all enjoyed realising how guys ought to be friends and held each other out. Super hot chapter. It's not easy with such a large group either! (A couple of name goofs but nothing an edit won't fix - I offer this to help not as a criticism. It was glorious!) > They all watched for a moment as Tom bobbed up and down on his own cock, moaning to himself. Tim, rather than Tom. (It was bound to happen.) > Charlie left his tent to find Tim, Tom, and Charlie naked around the camp in the morning light. Tom was the only one wearing anything, in just an apron as he heated up a stainless steel coffee pot on the portable grill, while Tim sucked his cock. Charlie was sitting ass up, waiting for someone to come by to fuck him. All but the first Charlie should be Aaron, I believe. Again, I hesitate to offer unsolicited editing feedback, but the story is so hot and such a great read I want to do my bit to make a smoother read for your followers. Can't wait to read more of your work.

9/11/23, 12:56 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you! Edited and submitted to republish. I make these mistakes in scenes with 2 characters, so with 6... yeah, it was bound to happen. I really appreciate the notes, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.