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skinpiss
9/11/23, 8:59 AM
excellent wanking story, fuckin hot. Malskin a brilliant author. could have helped with that fuckin German. Still looking for that quarter in Berlin.
Richard "Rocho" Wheeler
9/11/23, 8:47 AM
Your stories are normally very HOT and sexually stimulating! I think you definitely missed the boat in this 9ne. Very full quite boring. I know you have it in you to do better. Soo much BETTER!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT GREAT STORY! THANK YOU FOR YOUR EROTIC STORIES!!! I DO APPRECIATE YOUR ATTEMPT HERE. HAVE A GREAT DAY!!
9/11/23, 8:37 AM
Another one falls. I love the references to previous stories, like the frat house. It would be so easy to get repetitive that anyone affected just can't think of anything but gooning now, but you've taken it a step further and I really appreciate it. There are layers being added and it is impressive. They love their gooning, always leaking and needing to try to hide it. But the afflicted also have another purpose. Helping other guys experience the stench and lose themselves to their cocks too. As Zeke demonstrated, then they can team up and really keep each other going for hours.
Sep 10, 2023
9/11/23, 7:35 AM
Being bald and bearded, I fully support this story 👍😁
9/11/23, 7:11 AM
i love stories in which the Dominant seduces a submissive into giving up more and more control until there is no more to give up. Using the natural hormones of the Dominant as an addictive drug is a hot means to coerce the submissive without his quite realizing what was happening. The pace of seduction was really nicely handled. Stephen did provide a nice possibility to rescue Ethan which kept us wondering. (Actually i am still wondering about Stephen. It did seem like his character has been left as a loose end.
Ben
9/11/23, 6:30 AM
This was hot 🔥
9/10/23, 9:48 PM
Hot stuff as always! Nice pace as Chester is discovering his powers along the way, feeling himself more empowered and becoming more corrupted in it. Eager to see how things will go throughout the week! I'd certainly love a change in dress code in the office for the males, and see what changes in behaviours and hierarchies Chester will bring to the men in the office. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: One question though, you mentioned: _"Just two weeks ago, Jason had suddenly decided he needed a different job._" But Chester only made his wish the night before, so is that a sort of backstory that the spell is putting into Bryan's and Jason's minds, or was there a confusion in the timeline?

9/10/23, 9:59 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) The magic being utilized is reality altering, so for Bryan/Jason, their lives were exactly how they were before the wish except two weeks prior to the wish where Jason suddenly had a desire to change careers. Reality alters in the past, present, and future to match the wishes...something you'll see MUCH more of 'Friday' of Chester's week :P

9/11/23, 6:27 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Noted. That's what I thought to be too. It's just that it wasn't stated in Chester's wish so I didn't expect that their thoughts would retro back to a time before the wish was made. But that makes sense too. I'll stay tuned for the upcoming episodes of Chester's week as they roll out then :wink:
9/10/23, 8:24 PM
I haven't checked in to the site for a while, and what a pleasant surprise to find a new story from Edlam again! I remember the previous version...curious to see how you would reinvent the plot. Liking the start so far, definitely a much more developed storyline to get things going in Edlam's iconic dark and perverse fashion! Looking forward to see how dark, deep and out of control the world will go with Chester's corrupted mind. :wink:

9/10/23, 9:34 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) Thank you, friend! I'm hoping you get the writing bug back again sometime soon. You have such classics on the site...and I'm always excited to see the masculine feet dangling in your profile pic lol :tongue:

9/11/23, 6:24 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Cheers sir! I did started picking up some writing again recently, though it's been slow but I'm not giving it up yet! Glad to have your compliment...you inspire me quite a bit I'd say, so I hope to see more from you as well! :wink: Cool to hear my feet excite you...haha :grin:
9/11/23, 6:18 AM
Esto le da un giro nuevo... ahora le toca al maestro sufrir... pero emocionalmente xd
9/11/23, 5:56 AM
Simplemente arte, ojalá ese "señor" le haga ver al oficial Carlos su posición 🔥