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Anonymous
9/10/23, 5:13 PM
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9/10/23, 4:17 PM
Is this the final chapter or will there be another one? I was kinda hoping to see what happens after Matt takes full control of everyone.
9/10/23, 3:44 PM
This was fucking hot as always!!! Thanks for being such an incredible writer! Now bring on the himbo tops!! 🤤
9/10/23, 3:30 PM
I'm a bit confused by this ending. We're lead to believe that Eddie can very rapidly seize control of people just with his voice, but he makes no attempt to use his power here, he just kinda says "no fair, stop it!". I assumed this would be dealt with by him getting quickly gagged or something but he just... lets it happen....
9/10/23, 2:21 PM
Happy morning to read this chapter! Well done!
9/10/23, 1:41 PM
This story is just fantastic. THANK YOU. I cant wait for the powers to be harnessed and used for Bobby's pleasure
Anonymous
9/10/23, 1:28 PM
Wow that’s hot! Such a fun premise, and I love how the transformation was gradual and subtle from the very beginning. Great work, I can’t wait to see what’s next!
Anonymous
9/10/23, 1:12 PM
Keep going! Keep going!
9/10/23, 8:29 AM
So good and hot! :100: I hope Officer Carlos keeps cumming and cumming all over his uniform until making a mess of himself (and even so, he keep doing it after that!) :fire: Excelente inicio!
9/7/23, 10:18 PM
Like this concept! Would like to seem more detail in parts of the rubberized process maybe to make it hotter for future installments!

9/10/23, 8:09 AM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks for the feedback! English isn’t my first language so to me it seemed to take forever to write just a 1200 word story, but you are absolutely right, it could’ve been a bit longer, especially the rubberization process