Recent Comments

9/9/23, 5:48 AM
Great chapter! Was kinda expecting the himbo jock roommate would be a dumb jock that the nerdy one would trick and manipulate into fucking him ass with his huge dick, but I enjoyed it a lot ;)
9/8/23, 9:02 PM
This reads very much like a "final chapter" wrapping up the main story lines to this point. Is this planned as the end of this saga...for now? (I'm hoping there's more to come.)

9/9/23, 1:36 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Hi, I do find it interesting that you say it reads like the end, because this is actually just the halfway point of this story; I still have more chapters in the works. I'm very glad you are enjoying the story! Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Anonymous
9/9/23, 12:38 AM
I just want archie submitting to sammy and pete
Lavender Lad
9/8/23, 11:20 PM
Why does this story have zero comments??.? This is hot AF
9/8/23, 10:29 PM
I love a good twist at the end to setup a sequel. Thanks for finishing this. You're one of my favourites too.
9/8/23, 10:08 PM
Holy heck dude. Long running series aren't easy. Great job tying everything together. I just wish this was a movie – I suspect the VFX for this scene would be amazing!
Apr 11, 2021
9/8/23, 9:59 PM
I wish there was a part 2 to this story. I live the writing style and this is one of my favorite premises.
9/7/23, 5:26 PM
Oh heck, I love a good ideavirus. Also, glad to see you brought back Mark – I don't recall if he had a name in his first appearance. I'm curious if that first interaction is going to protect him somehow. Very hot, but also a great read.

9/7/23, 9:18 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Thank you. And yes, Mark was unnamed earlier in the story. I knew I would come back to him, but he didn't have a name until I decided to name the 4 boys in the warehouse: Matthew, Mark, Luke and John.

9/8/23, 8:23 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Wowza – out of all the Christian symbolism in the naming, I totally missed that one.
Sep 8, 2023
9/8/23, 6:57 PM
You have the seriously uncanny ability of tapping right into my innermost fantasies and making it nigh impossible for me not to touch myself. I can see myself enjoying this story over an over, latching onto certain sentences that really make me appraise this type of transformation in a new, hot way. Awesome story.

9/8/23, 7:23 PM
@[felix.nox](/user/show/2338654) It’s always very nice to hear that! This one was a lot of fun to write. If I can get someone to touch themselves once then I consider the story a success.
Anonymous
9/8/23, 6:26 PM
wow!! so good. can't wait to see how the jock reacts after and how he breaks down and begs for more.