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8/25/23, 6:22 PM
I loved this so much. It's not just that hot little pocket gays really do it for me, it's that you're so good at writing these transformation stories.

9/8/23, 3:43 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks for the kind words! Glad that people still enjoy some of the older ones.
9/8/23, 3:02 PM
Marco shouldn't be the only one in rubber. I think more of these muscle sluts would look great in their own set of rubber.
DomBottom
9/7/23, 10:41 PM
I liked parts of the story but the hetero parts were a real boner killer and found it strange that a guy who identifies as gay would want to have sex with a woman. The actual gay story was good but would have definitely enjoyed it more without the straight sex in it

9/8/23, 2:13 PM
@[DomBottom](/user/show/10035477) Ha - I hear ya. If it helps, while I wrote the scenes with Claire to be sexy, the aim wasn't really to get myself/the reader off. It's more to add to the messiness/character-building of the situation. Like, when you fuck a guy, the dick that's doing the fucking is bring along all its other fucks, too, lol. So Jimmy is definitely getting fucked by Deonte - repeatedly and in a variety of ways. But is he also being fucked by Claire? And for me, that messiness makes my dick hard - and is an element I'm playing with a bit more in this series, as opposed to my others. Definitely not saying you need to like those parts though, lol. I'm a big believer in people enjoying their own things. But in case you wanted a peek into my own motivations. Cheers and thanks for reading!
9/8/23, 2:13 PM
This is so good
9/7/23, 4:00 PM
this story was so much fun to read! love the organic style and the amount of humour (not too much, not in weird places) and the right amount of over the top ridiculousness. definitely would recommend and looking forward to more!

9/8/23, 2:03 PM
@[dumbjockhunter](/user/show/10025609) Hey, glad you liked it - and my humor, lol. Juggling other series (check 'em out), but will definitely continue this one.
Zander
9/8/23, 10:46 AM
Thanks for the continuation. I would like the next chapters to be from Eddie’s point of view and it would be nice to see his reaction as Matt beats him and wins)
9/8/23, 7:40 AM
Glorious! What a chapter. A culmination of all the build up and growth and connections the characters have built. Plus hot sex. I think Sammy's right, the team will remember this and appreciate it. Submission required? It needs trust, how fortunate Pete has built some with his boy.
9/8/23, 6:08 AM
Awwww poor Ryan . It’s funny I keep expecting Eddie to appear and surprise Matthew when he in the middle of these things hehe 😳😳😳
9/8/23, 4:59 AM
I reeally enjoy your writing style! You have a skill for the craft.
9/5/23, 7:11 PM
This reminds me of another favorite story told from the straight perspective. This reinvention is the gay version I never knew I needed. Well done, Loving it so far! I'm anxious to see where this goes next! A new favorite!

9/5/23, 7:44 PM
@Jemsea13 Very much an homage to that particular story! It was 'gay'-ified by the wiki in the NCMC days, but it was CLEARLY a straight story edited to be gay. This one has much more plot and is MUCH more gay. :P

9/8/23, 3:15 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I LOVED this! I've wanted to see a version of this that wasn't just a copy/paste of the hetero story with some words changed for ages and I'm so excited to see where you take it!