Recent Comments

9/8/23, 7:40 AM
Glorious! What a chapter. A culmination of all the build up and growth and connections the characters have built. Plus hot sex. I think Sammy's right, the team will remember this and appreciate it. Submission required? It needs trust, how fortunate Pete has built some with his boy.
9/8/23, 6:08 AM
Awwww poor Ryan . It’s funny I keep expecting Eddie to appear and surprise Matthew when he in the middle of these things hehe 😳😳😳
9/8/23, 4:59 AM
I reeally enjoy your writing style! You have a skill for the craft.
9/5/23, 7:11 PM
This reminds me of another favorite story told from the straight perspective. This reinvention is the gay version I never knew I needed. Well done, Loving it so far! I'm anxious to see where this goes next! A new favorite!

9/5/23, 7:44 PM
@Jemsea13 Very much an homage to that particular story! It was 'gay'-ified by the wiki in the NCMC days, but it was CLEARLY a straight story edited to be gay. This one has much more plot and is MUCH more gay. :P

9/8/23, 3:15 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I LOVED this! I've wanted to see a version of this that wasn't just a copy/paste of the hetero story with some words changed for ages and I'm so excited to see where you take it!
Elm
9/8/23, 1:34 AM
I love this story so much, the tension is building!
Mind bender
9/7/23, 10:04 PM
Love this! Absolutely love this! The story can go in so many directions with the new charcter. Very creative πŸ’«πŸ’«πŸ’•
9/6/23, 9:08 PM
I am not exactly sure when you wrote this at first, but it was at least fifteen years ago that you started this story. Fifteen years ago that you laid the groundwork for Mark and Michael. I am honest to God _fucking amazed_ that you managed to tie that thread so effortlessly after all this time. Now, I loved Michael-the-slut. I really enjoyed the vignettes that involved him. But man. Props for maintaining plot cohesion over so many years.

9/7/23, 9:23 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you. I outlined the ending about the same time I wrote Chapter 2, so I knew all along what to build towards. I did cheat a bit in that I edited a tiny part of Chapter 1 to fit once I had a firm idea (Initially, when 'redeemed' Michael would have been a submissive slave to Ryan, instead of getting his soul back, but that doesn't fit the lore that I created in Chapter 2 on.) But yeah, I have written and rewritten the plot beats in my head 100 times in 15 years. Now that they are on paper, I get to daydream about other story ideas. I'm glad you enjoyed.
9/7/23, 8:35 PM
i love symbiotes, and i especially enjoyed the beginning scene, where terrence was being lovingly handled and, "cuddled?" either way, the gentle embrace and the symbiote implantation was hot and wholesome :3333 P.S. sorry for the late reply but I saw your reply on Brain Feed; kk! would it be ok if my headcanon was that alpha and beta drones are kinda "married"/lovingly bonded to each other =v= a lil sappy thinking ig

9/7/23, 9:15 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) You can rewrite details regarding the alpha and beta drones. I always imagined that once beta is fully online, he would be paired with his friend, alpha. And they would soon be producing the most powerful drones in the Cum Center. If they still had independent and emotional thoughts, they would be proud parents. And marriage or bonding between drones isn't sappy at all.
9/7/23, 8:42 PM
Lovely story. Loved the transformation.
9/7/23, 6:18 PM
Small world reading and enjoying a fellow ASU grads stories!

9/7/23, 6:38 PM
@[lthrboyinrbbr](/user/show/2221700) If only I knew more kinky guys in college. I wouldn't have had to go all the way to Wisconsin. But in 2004, it felt a little more challenging to find these kind of social niches.