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9/6/23, 8:29 PM
This is a great start! I love the imagery of the naked sleepwalking men and the Pied Piper-like master who compels them all. Also some good dramatic tension with Mike and Kyle temporarily resisting. I'd love to see what happens next as the master presumably expands his power.
Sep 6, 2023
9/6/23, 7:38 PM
Love these type of stories, with erotic kidnapping/seduction, but what was missing was chloroform. You need to have that in chapter 2.
Sep 6, 2023
9/6/23, 7:21 PM
Another great story 🥵🥵🥵
Sep 6, 2023
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9/6/23, 7:19 PM
That's an awesome start... Need more chapters with more horniness
7/14/23, 7:02 AM
Personally i thought the treatment at the facility was incredibly harsh and Liam's ultimate demise unfair. Admittedly as a submissive bottom slut enthralled with leather and bondage and deeply intrigued with Master/slave relationships, i also loved the deep soft leather, the bondage, the drugging to dim the mind and disable the vocal chords, being plugged and fucked by the orderlies, the authoritarian objectifying nature of the way Liam (as Josh) was treated. Every aspect of Liam's situation contributed to an incredibly arousing story. It seems other readers didn't have nearly the strong objection i felt. Perhaps my sense of mild outrage at Liam's final fate really indicates the shortcomings of my own submissive nature. It's not enough for me to submit and obey. i expect i still need considerable training to be completely docile and accepting of the way i may be treated by Superior Men. I would have been much happier with the ending if the new Liam and Brad had together arranged to have the new Josh released from the asylum to become their slave. Nevertheless i do thank Master Stormbound for an enthralling story, and perhaps for the nightmares and achingly hard morning wood i will be experiencing as a result.

9/6/23, 6:22 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Glad you enjoyed all the gear and bondage, even if you felt the end was a bit unfair. Then again I did intend for his fate to be unfair, getting what his body lusts for but his mind recoiled from, and a fate that to one is unfair retribution while to the other is just punishment. If you're having trouble submitting and obeying perhaps you need some "treatment" as well. The wonderful doctors at Echo Grove would love to help "cure" you of your rebelliousness and assertiveness and embrace your true submissive nature. Of course once the treatment starts there's no telling when it will end ;)
9/6/23, 5:49 PM
Very excited to see what will happen next. Always a pleasure to read you.
9/6/23, 5:32 PM
Rereading this chapter was even better than the first time. It also helped knowing what comes next. Jake you are an awesome story teller.
9/4/23, 10:47 AM
Yeah, just in terms of "a story I would read no matter how much you dived into the details", this is exactly my sort of thing. Maybe not erotic specifically, but I'm interested as all fuck in what you're doing here.

9/6/23, 4:28 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) That's great to hear. The other main parts of fracture will also expand the world in different ways.
9/6/23, 4:08 PM
All my August and September is entering to this website every 15 minutes to see if a new chapter of this story has been published. Never readed anything so good.
9/6/23, 3:21 PM
The sex was hot, but the visual of Gabe saving his teammates was fantastic! Love where you're taking this, and looking forward to seeing if Gabe can save the day.