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10/18/23, 11:35 PM
Baralai, I am always amazed at how inventive your stories are -- and so amazingly hot! Never in a million years would I have imagined a halfway house for troubled young men, led by a female version of Dame Edna, would keep me going from start to finish, but here we are. You deserve to know how great your stuff is. Just...find an editor ;-)
10/18/23, 10:38 PM
Fantastic job! That book embedded itself deep in my brain too. I love that Gabe's the one who took the final step. I gotta explore more creepy houses.
10/18/23, 10:13 PM
I don't remember the original Goosebumps tale but this stands so well on its own. Well done! The trick to get him back and the way the mirror defended itself. The muscle growth and the price of it was a hot dynamic.
10/18/23, 9:20 PM
Terrific muscle growth story -- really got into the head of the protagonist. Well written.
10/18/23, 9:13 PM
The writing could be a bit less jokey/tongue in cheek, but I really liked the idea and concept for this one!
10/18/23, 9:11 PM
什么乱七八糟的一大堆东西?男人有阴道吗?还有怀孕?
Kip
10/18/23, 8:31 PM
I love how in your establishing shot you make sure the reader knows how much Excalibur sucks. 😁
10/18/23, 8:12 PM
Mmmmmm hope there come's more start is damn hot
10/18/23, 7:52 PM
Really great take on this genre of story. Really liked how the protagonist fought against the corrupting influence and basically stayed an innocent. I was actually worried for him until the very end so it was a great resolution.
10/18/23, 7:38 PM
I keep getting drawn back to this story now and again. Still an awesome rubber read. Have you thought of expanding the story to Brad and Vincent?