Recent Comments

Aug 31, 2023
9/3/23, 6:53 AM
A truly original idea, realized with wit and panache! Be still, my...well, you know... Now I must go back and enjoy your other stories which I somehow missed. And I look forward to more in the future.

9/5/23, 3:47 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) You've been SO SUPPORTIVE! I might just have to keep writing -- thank you!
Aug 31, 2023
9/2/23, 1:04 AM
Wow! This was a surprise. Well done.

9/5/23, 3:46 PM
@Jemsea13 Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Aug 24, 2023
9/3/23, 7:17 AM
I confess I feel lost with this one. I didn't catch enough of what happened to feel anything but...stupid. Was it me? Or maybe some dots in the writing could be connected a bit more clearly?

9/5/23, 3:44 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) I really appreciate your honesty – this is one where the links between realities are probably too much in my own mind. You’re not the first to feel lost; I think at some point the concept may have overpowered the action.
Jun 17, 2023
8/20/23, 2:17 PM
Super sleep deprived reading this lol. It was super hard to read because I kept tearing up. Really good. I love the “waking up from a coma and seeing your loved one next to you” trope.

9/5/23, 3:04 PM
@[Mroof01234](/user/show/10002421) Thanks! I was mostly that writing it.
9/5/23, 1:41 PM
Something about stories where a character still thinks and acts like they're "straight" while having gay sex really gets me going, and this chapter was absolutely fantastic. I love the contrast between the characters Charlie passes the curse to and how each of them adjust how the curse is affecting Charlie. Excited to see the second part! I feel like you couldn't go wrong with some chapters about Greg going through a couple of different personalities while meeting men out in public, or Alex (?) and Steve (the couple from Abstinence Club) changing the guys they have group sex with; it would be fun to see the scene with Father Alverez from their perspective. Of course, whatever you decide to do, I'm sure it will be fantastic and fun!
9/5/23, 1:35 PM
Excellent and enjoyable. Great reading.keep up the work!!
9/5/23, 1:15 PM
Very excited for the rest of this story
9/4/23, 6:32 PM
just reread it, and still awesome and very sexy~~ Just a couple of questions again: would you say this story is more corruption, or assimilation, conversion, infection, alien invasion, etc? ig what adjective would fit this story best? and im still curious about the origin/who created Administrator and the entire program! finally, is there any chance for Jake and David to be "consciously" united, where both of them are aware/alive and "lovingly" bonded together?

9/5/23, 12:38 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I would categorize it as an assimilation. And towards the end, as the men are creating soldiers ... it becomes an invasion. Not necessarily an alien invasion. I think it's a corporate invasion. It's up to interpretation on who's behind it. Is it the government? Personally, as we move into the future, I think it's a corporate invasion. I think of companies taking over. Some company has basically found out what men want and have programmed them. Then created a double-Y chromosome male super soldier to basically invade the remaining population of the Earth. But again, it's up to what you want to be the origin. I left it ambiguous.
9/5/23, 12:34 PM
I'm now curious to know if anyone else had thought/feared Silo-as-Mr.-Wallace might have pulled a fast one on Rahim and replaced or joined the cum on the way out... _into Rahim_. I could see both Silo and Khalil having enough motivation, or even just the scientific curiosity for what would happen. Hell, simply the question of _if_ Silo can even do that in the first place has _me_ curious. I prefer having that not been the outcome though, as the dubious consent involved is out of character, likely for both of them tbh. Not gonna address the whole situation of assimilation with ones protector/love/guardian-figure lmfao 💀 That aside though, I see a lacrosse team gangbang (oh my god my phone actually suggested the word gangbang wtf??? I swear I've never used it before... I think 😅) incoming, which is enticing and sounds potentially quite complicated! I had predicted this when I caught the wink from Carson, but I thought they'd already stolen him by that point. This is turning out to be quite the ride indeed! I've very much enjoyed how this has been going so far and look forward to future hijinks and chaos, as well as the seemingly-all-too-likely orgy _cumming_ up 😏 in a future installment. I've had this story on my to-read list for (holy shit it's been on here for) about 5 months or longer, and I'm exceedingly glad to have finally read through all of it! Very eagerly anticipating future updates! Hoping you can _comfortably_ squeeze in time to work on this with your job, and I'll be _exercising_ patience in the meantime 💪🏼😁👍🏼 Cheers!
9/4/23, 8:50 AM
Much prefer daddies but hot story nonetheless

9/5/23, 11:31 AM
@[chubbychub](/user/show/10011654) Daddies will be back hahaha :wink: :heart: