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9/5/23, 1:15 PM
Very excited for the rest of this story
9/4/23, 6:32 PM
just reread it, and still awesome and very sexy~~ Just a couple of questions again: would you say this story is more corruption, or assimilation, conversion, infection, alien invasion, etc? ig what adjective would fit this story best? and im still curious about the origin/who created Administrator and the entire program! finally, is there any chance for Jake and David to be "consciously" united, where both of them are aware/alive and "lovingly" bonded together?

9/5/23, 12:38 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I would categorize it as an assimilation. And towards the end, as the men are creating soldiers ... it becomes an invasion. Not necessarily an alien invasion. I think it's a corporate invasion. It's up to interpretation on who's behind it. Is it the government? Personally, as we move into the future, I think it's a corporate invasion. I think of companies taking over. Some company has basically found out what men want and have programmed them. Then created a double-Y chromosome male super soldier to basically invade the remaining population of the Earth. But again, it's up to what you want to be the origin. I left it ambiguous.
9/5/23, 12:34 PM
I'm now curious to know if anyone else had thought/feared Silo-as-Mr.-Wallace might have pulled a fast one on Rahim and replaced or joined the cum on the way out... _into Rahim_. I could see both Silo and Khalil having enough motivation, or even just the scientific curiosity for what would happen. Hell, simply the question of _if_ Silo can even do that in the first place has _me_ curious. I prefer having that not been the outcome though, as the dubious consent involved is out of character, likely for both of them tbh. Not gonna address the whole situation of assimilation with ones protector/love/guardian-figure lmfao πŸ’€ That aside though, I see a lacrosse team gangbang (oh my god my phone actually suggested the word gangbang wtf??? I swear I've never used it before... I think πŸ˜…) incoming, which is enticing and sounds potentially quite complicated! I had predicted this when I caught the wink from Carson, but I thought they'd already stolen him by that point. This is turning out to be quite the ride indeed! I've very much enjoyed how this has been going so far and look forward to future hijinks and chaos, as well as the seemingly-all-too-likely orgy _cumming_ up 😏 in a future installment. I've had this story on my to-read list for (holy shit it's been on here for) about 5 months or longer, and I'm exceedingly glad to have finally read through all of it! Very eagerly anticipating future updates! Hoping you can _comfortably_ squeeze in time to work on this with your job, and I'll be _exercising_ patience in the meantime πŸ’ͺπŸΌπŸ˜πŸ‘πŸΌ Cheers!
9/4/23, 8:50 AM
Much prefer daddies but hot story nonetheless

9/5/23, 11:31 AM
@[chubbychub](/user/show/10011654) Daddies will be back hahaha :wink: :heart:
Malemann54
8/29/23, 4:27 PM
You mentioned before that English was not your first language and a couple of points on how you describe clothes. First off, is it really necessary for you to talk about the characters regular clothes? When you call clothes "social" I think you mean dress clothes as opposed to casual clothes, also unless one is talking about a dress military uniform a man's shirt is never called a blouse. Otherwise the story itself is great, keep up the good work.

9/3/23, 2:22 PM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) Thank u for the tips! The description is just part of the writing process to help the readers to imagine the scene. But sometimes, even I forget doing it hahaha <3

Malemann54
9/4/23, 11:48 PM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Just wanted to go into more detail to describe clothes. Is it really necessary to describe the character's street clothes? It doesn't seem to add anything to the story, keep on with the descriptions of their fetish wear. Ways to describe men's clothes, dress, formal, work, casual, and sport. Also in your first story when I commented on your use of the term "mydear" what I meant to say is that no American man would address another so unless he was intimate or flirting with him. The term "my dear" would be considered both old fashioned and effemanine.

9/5/23, 11:30 AM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) I'm using your tips on the next chapter. I said It was part of the reading process, but I understand that the "treatment" wear add more to the story than the street wear. Keep commenting please! All of you are helping me a lot to improve my stories!! β™₯️β™₯️
9/5/23, 10:12 AM
love this new chapter. I hope Archie King and Buck and his Dad would make an appearance too just like Mav did.
Hinner
9/1/23, 6:29 PM
I tried entering the codes and none of them worked... :c

9/3/23, 3:19 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Both should be able to use now since both events are happening now.

Gay Harem
9/4/23, 6:46 AM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Hey! They should work now. Tell me your ID, please :relaxed:

Hinner
9/4/23, 8:00 AM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Hey, they did work! Thanks!!! My ID is 1191188

Gay Harem
9/5/23, 5:59 AM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Rewards! :heart_eyes:
James
9/5/23, 4:58 AM
Can't wait to read the next one, I am loving this.
mic
9/5/23, 4:13 AM
fucking great story, super ideas, hot written, nice tricking and light blackmail, more please, great surprising end, my favorit would be if alex would be hard by the humilating, want to be nick slave and his brothers, and fuck and be together with aiden and they sell his ass more, and evtl feminisate him - give him dress and big tits implants and make him their muscle himbo bitch
9/5/23, 4:03 AM
Outstanding chapter! So hot! I love the contentment the team members feel finding their place too. A clear rank in the hierarchy. The desire, the right, to be bred by those above and plant their seed in those below.