Recent Comments

9/4/23, 4:48 PM
I just continue to love this story so much -- though damnit, everyone, get with the god sex romp and have unbridled fun with it until it all comes crashing down around them!

9/4/23, 9:07 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) What could possibly go wrong with an unbridled god sex romp? :wink:

9/5/23, 3:32 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) So many wonderful things can go so delightfully wrong... ;-)
James
9/5/23, 3:15 AM
I've must say this is by far one of the best stories I have read. Now I'm worried for poor Sammy, maybe he needs to explain why he's afraid to submit. Of course in my case I'd only want to submit.
9/4/23, 3:28 AM
This was a great start and I'm excited to see where you're taking this. My personal hope is that their original master sees through this and gets the upper-hand on these guys; or maybe the master is using the two as bait, foreseeing this enemy's plans.

9/5/23, 12:37 AM
@[Tempest888](/user/show/908611) "the masters" (both for Trevor/Liam and for the unnamed ones) seemed to be framed as pretty tyrannical and petty, so my guess is an end where all "the masters" lose

9/5/23, 2:42 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) True, but I felt that wouldn't be the safest ending for Trevor and Liam. At least their current masters let them have a relationship together. I just want them to be a pair of happy, hypnotized, himbos together~
9/5/23, 2:20 AM
Thanks Jack. Now this is a pickle. I'm sure that Mav and Coach will figure something out. I don't want to live without more of Sammy.
mic
9/5/23, 12:27 AM
Great story , love the tricking , please more , and more little brothers should do , hope he orders a chasity cage with his credit card and hold his card
Martin
9/4/23, 8:01 PM
I don't know why you're so anxious about this story. It's a classic rubbrsome, maybe not just as refined as your later work, but it still checks all the marks that I'd expect of your stories!

9/4/23, 11:12 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Oh ... you just wait. The story becomes very talkie. Basically, a character is going to talk and talk and talk. There will be some action. But I had to learn that it's better to move the story by showing, not telling. Later chapters will feel bogged down by exposition.
9/3/23, 9:17 PM
So happy you’re back, your writing is a gift. No comments on the chapter yet as I haven’t finished it.

9/4/23, 9:06 PM
@[brium](/user/show/10011305) Hopefully it lives up to expectations.
9/3/23, 6:17 PM
The ethical slut HAHAHAHA love that crossover

9/4/23, 9:06 PM
@[revenge88fics](/user/show/917832) :wink:
9/3/23, 4:14 AM
Holy shit, how did I miss this story before?! This was AMAZING! I'm so excited for more. You write the absolute best reality change stories on the site. So so so much talent.

9/4/23, 9:05 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Oh, thanks! What a great compliment! I credit it to reading too much smut over the years.