Recent Comments

James
9/5/23, 3:15 AM
I've must say this is by far one of the best stories I have read. Now I'm worried for poor Sammy, maybe he needs to explain why he's afraid to submit. Of course in my case I'd only want to submit.
9/4/23, 3:28 AM
This was a great start and I'm excited to see where you're taking this. My personal hope is that their original master sees through this and gets the upper-hand on these guys; or maybe the master is using the two as bait, foreseeing this enemy's plans.

9/5/23, 12:37 AM
@[Tempest888](/user/show/908611) "the masters" (both for Trevor/Liam and for the unnamed ones) seemed to be framed as pretty tyrannical and petty, so my guess is an end where all "the masters" lose

9/5/23, 2:42 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) True, but I felt that wouldn't be the safest ending for Trevor and Liam. At least their current masters let them have a relationship together. I just want them to be a pair of happy, hypnotized, himbos together~
9/5/23, 2:20 AM
Thanks Jack. Now this is a pickle. I'm sure that Mav and Coach will figure something out. I don't want to live without more of Sammy.
mic
9/5/23, 12:27 AM
Great story , love the tricking , please more , and more little brothers should do , hope he orders a chasity cage with his credit card and hold his card
Martin
9/4/23, 8:01 PM
I don't know why you're so anxious about this story. It's a classic rubbrsome, maybe not just as refined as your later work, but it still checks all the marks that I'd expect of your stories!

9/4/23, 11:12 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Oh ... you just wait. The story becomes very talkie. Basically, a character is going to talk and talk and talk. There will be some action. But I had to learn that it's better to move the story by showing, not telling. Later chapters will feel bogged down by exposition.
9/3/23, 9:17 PM
So happy you’re back, your writing is a gift. No comments on the chapter yet as I haven’t finished it.

9/4/23, 9:06 PM
@[brium](/user/show/10011305) Hopefully it lives up to expectations.
9/3/23, 6:17 PM
The ethical slut HAHAHAHA love that crossover

9/4/23, 9:06 PM
@[revenge88fics](/user/show/917832) :wink:
9/3/23, 4:14 AM
Holy shit, how did I miss this story before?! This was AMAZING! I'm so excited for more. You write the absolute best reality change stories on the site. So so so much talent.

9/4/23, 9:05 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Oh, thanks! What a great compliment! I credit it to reading too much smut over the years.
9/4/23, 1:04 PM
You are one of my favorite writers, and it's stuff like this that's why. Humor, plot, world building, all while delivering some of the hottest erotic writing on the site. I'm glad you get commissions for your work, because you deserve to be paid for your talent! Fanboi-ing a bit here but I wanted you to know.

9/4/23, 7:51 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) What a delightful comment to come home to! Thanks! I thrive on comments, so this really made my day.