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So happy you’re back, your writing is a gift. No comments on the chapter yet as I haven’t finished it.

The ethical slut HAHAHAHA love that crossover

Holy shit, how did I miss this story before?! This was AMAZING! I'm so excited for more. You write the absolute best reality change stories on the site. So so so much talent.

You are one of my favorite writers, and it's stuff like this that's why. Humor, plot, world building, all while delivering some of the hottest erotic writing on the site. I'm glad you get commissions for your work, because you deserve to be paid for your talent! Fanboi-ing a bit here but I wanted you to know.

Perhaps by the next chapter his brow will return from its furlough.

just realized: Mr. Meyer might've gotten assimilated & converted from the law practice with Lee and Daniel back earlier in the series? idk, just a mini headcanon, but very satisfying to think about alien conversion :wink:

Would be nice if you picked this up for a reunion between Daddy Hunter and the boy's father. Maybe get the father to try on that oversized shirt, lose the homophobia, and enjoy a good old-fashioned cunt fucking. Maybe let the boy sample what it's like to plow a tight hairy cub. A real triple trailer trash ho down!

This chapter or this part of story, I’ve lost interest and probably won’t read any further. But the story up till now had been good and met me coming back. But best of luck

Congratulations! I remember when i first stumbled upon this story more than a decade ago. I was searching "muscle growth" and "dumbing" and going through all the stories that came up. Of course Chapter 2 of this story came up, and i loved it. The reason i love those combination of tags is you often get an "exchange" of sorts; they lose intelligence but gain muscle. This was pretty much the most literal version of that, where you were given the exact numbers and could do the math. But the other reason this story stuck out was the conditions to undo the Curses. They're what really set this apart from other stories where people are being corrupted. You have these karmic punishments that are specifically crafted for the individual, but then you're told exactly what they need to do to undo it. Its both fairy tail like and legalese (as shown by the last chapter). So you have these hot scenes where people are being transformed, and you love their new sexy slutty forms, but you're also rooting for them to undo it, because you know they have the ability to do it. While i was mostly here for Tank and the stuff around him (might have skimmed some of the other transformations...), the story of Ryan finding out what happened to him, who was responsible, and trying to hold on to his humanity despite everything was one of the main reasons i kept checking to see if this story updated. Finding out about Gabe and Mark, how they contrast each other, and how you seeded them early is definitely the thing that is going to make me reread this, and part more attention to Michael, who didn't really interest me the first time through. As Derek Wlliams showed in one of his stories, this story has become an important part of the foundation of stories on this site, and I'd love to see more stories that take cues from it, especially in regards to corruption and redemption. This story was no small task, and at 100k words you should be proud. It may have taken 15 years to write, but i think the wait was well worth it. Even if you write nothing else (and i definitely hope you continue to write), this was a great accomplishment. (I could go into much more depth, and probably will much later, but for now, thank you for writing this.)