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9/4/23, 2:21 PM
Congratulations! I remember when i first stumbled upon this story more than a decade ago. I was searching "muscle growth" and "dumbing" and going through all the stories that came up. Of course Chapter 2 of this story came up, and i loved it. The reason i love those combination of tags is you often get an "exchange" of sorts; they lose intelligence but gain muscle. This was pretty much the most literal version of that, where you were given the exact numbers and could do the math. But the other reason this story stuck out was the conditions to undo the Curses. They're what really set this apart from other stories where people are being corrupted. You have these karmic punishments that are specifically crafted for the individual, but then you're told exactly what they need to do to undo it. Its both fairy tail like and legalese (as shown by the last chapter). So you have these hot scenes where people are being transformed, and you love their new sexy slutty forms, but you're also rooting for them to undo it, because you know they have the ability to do it. While i was mostly here for Tank and the stuff around him (might have skimmed some of the other transformations...), the story of Ryan finding out what happened to him, who was responsible, and trying to hold on to his humanity despite everything was one of the main reasons i kept checking to see if this story updated. Finding out about Gabe and Mark, how they contrast each other, and how you seeded them early is definitely the thing that is going to make me reread this, and part more attention to Michael, who didn't really interest me the first time through. As Derek Wlliams showed in one of his stories, this story has become an important part of the foundation of stories on this site, and I'd love to see more stories that take cues from it, especially in regards to corruption and redemption. This story was no small task, and at 100k words you should be proud. It may have taken 15 years to write, but i think the wait was well worth it. Even if you write nothing else (and i definitely hope you continue to write), this was a great accomplishment. (I could go into much more depth, and probably will much later, but for now, thank you for writing this.)
9/3/23, 2:39 PM
I would love to cook and housekeep for a daddy like you

9/4/23, 9:51 AM
@[sarah1](/user/show/10025927) I’ll pay you back in care and pleasure ;)

9/4/23, 12:18 PM
@[Daddysscent](/user/show/10011394) That would be lovely Daddy, would love to know more.x
9/4/23, 12:14 PM
This has been a fantastic ride! Thanks so much for all your hard (sexy) work!!
Frory
9/4/23, 11:24 AM
Can't wait for season 2. I wonder what next demon will be? Leviathan the Envy? Belzeebub the Glutonny? Or perhaps Lucifer the fallen star, Pride?
9/4/23, 9:26 AM
Every time I read this series, I feel excited and my whole body trembles. While I wish poor Jon could get his love back, I also get excited by the thought of me being forced to lose my memory and be a small, chubby old butler slave forever. Maybe I'm not the only reader who wants to be in Jon's current predicament.
9/2/23, 3:07 PM
This was so hot, cant wait for more!

9/4/23, 7:40 AM
@[Blue85](/user/show/10011960) Glad you liked it! Still beginning but I have a few stories on drafts
Axe
9/3/23, 12:53 AM
Instant fave, gave up my job to be a trainer this year because it really is a no brainer to be a trainer - glad you get it

9/4/23, 7:39 AM
@[Axe](/user/show/10039048) It really IS a no-brainer to become a big, musky, dumb musclebro. We understand each other
9/2/23, 4:14 PM
Great story, I hope the next instalment has them convert Jesse into a front counter himbo ☺️♥️

9/4/23, 7:39 AM
@[Moo68au](/user/show/919772) Thank you! I thought about this being a one-shot but you gave me an idea that could work… we’ll see
hairyartist
9/2/23, 12:35 PM
Hot Man, Thanks!!

9/4/23, 7:38 AM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Thanks!! Really appreciate it :)
9/4/23, 6:19 AM
Ya me pregunto que pasará cuando Rafa pierda toda su rebeldía 😮

9/4/23, 7:31 AM
@[Splat Player](/user/show/10027939) Quizá en dos o tres capítulos :3 solo diré que esa parte ya esta escrita :3