Recent Comments

mic
9/5/23, 4:13 AM
fucking great story, super ideas, hot written, nice tricking and light blackmail, more please, great surprising end, my favorit would be if alex would be hard by the humilating, want to be nick slave and his brothers, and fuck and be together with aiden and they sell his ass more, and evtl feminisate him - give him dress and big tits implants and make him their muscle himbo bitch
9/5/23, 4:03 AM
Outstanding chapter! So hot! I love the contentment the team members feel finding their place too. A clear rank in the hierarchy. The desire, the right, to be bred by those above and plant their seed in those below.
James
9/5/23, 3:58 AM
Damn why can't I be that Lucky?
9/4/23, 4:48 PM
I just continue to love this story so much -- though damnit, everyone, get with the god sex romp and have unbridled fun with it until it all comes crashing down around them!

9/4/23, 9:07 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) What could possibly go wrong with an unbridled god sex romp? :wink:

9/5/23, 3:32 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) So many wonderful things can go so delightfully wrong... ;-)
James
9/5/23, 3:15 AM
I've must say this is by far one of the best stories I have read. Now I'm worried for poor Sammy, maybe he needs to explain why he's afraid to submit. Of course in my case I'd only want to submit.
9/4/23, 3:28 AM
This was a great start and I'm excited to see where you're taking this. My personal hope is that their original master sees through this and gets the upper-hand on these guys; or maybe the master is using the two as bait, foreseeing this enemy's plans.

9/5/23, 12:37 AM
@[Tempest888](/user/show/908611) "the masters" (both for Trevor/Liam and for the unnamed ones) seemed to be framed as pretty tyrannical and petty, so my guess is an end where all "the masters" lose

9/5/23, 2:42 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) True, but I felt that wouldn't be the safest ending for Trevor and Liam. At least their current masters let them have a relationship together. I just want them to be a pair of happy, hypnotized, himbos together~
9/5/23, 2:20 AM
Thanks Jack. Now this is a pickle. I'm sure that Mav and Coach will figure something out. I don't want to live without more of Sammy.
mic
9/5/23, 12:27 AM
Great story , love the tricking , please more , and more little brothers should do , hope he orders a chasity cage with his credit card and hold his card
Martin
9/4/23, 8:01 PM
I don't know why you're so anxious about this story. It's a classic rubbrsome, maybe not just as refined as your later work, but it still checks all the marks that I'd expect of your stories!

9/4/23, 11:12 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Oh ... you just wait. The story becomes very talkie. Basically, a character is going to talk and talk and talk. There will be some action. But I had to learn that it's better to move the story by showing, not telling. Later chapters will feel bogged down by exposition.