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9/2/23, 11:40 AM
I have waited so long for this story to have continued. Amazing.

9/2/23, 6:26 PM
@[Mreyes](/user/show/53459) Thank you! I appreciate people actually remembered the story from when I stopped posting years ago. This story has been swirling around my head for 15 years, and I'm happy I was able to finish it. I hope you enjoyed.
9/2/23, 4:12 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH Real time THOUGHT process: Oh no. Go Gabe! (...where's Michael?) OH NO! Is Asmodai going to win?! Go Ryan! (...where's Michael?) OH NO!!! IS ASMODAI GOING TO WIN?! Mark! Mark... MARK!!! SO MUCH SET UP, SO MUCH PAYOFF AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH

9/2/23, 6:25 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) I am glad you enjoyed it, Blindseer. I know you have have been commenting on the story for a while, and I appreciate it. I also personally enjoy stories where the outcome isn't bleak or evil, which is strange given the moral implications of the MC kink. I wanted to tell you a few times not to worry too much about a 'happy ending' but I didn't want to give anything away. I think you will enjoy the epilogue too. Thank you for reading.
9/2/23, 5:58 PM
I'm delighted to see you continue this storyline. It's a refreshing take on the genre and full of anticipation and potential. Can't wait to read the next installment.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Hopefully coming sooner than the last part. 😊
9/2/23, 4:56 AM
I'm a sucker for process-focused changes and control, so this was a real delight! I'm so glad I finally had the chance to read it.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Glad you liked it!
Whiteypa
9/2/23, 4:52 PM
Always love when Superman's brain is transformed by a hypnotist! Hope to hear more of what happens to the flying boy scout!
mikegay4u
9/2/23, 4:47 PM
I almost felt like I was watching the action in the story rather than reading it. It's so erotic. Such a great story.
9/2/23, 4:47 PM
Looks like everyone got saved in the end. I wonder if Ryan & Gabe will end up together? Can't wait for the aftermath to see what happened to everyone who had their soul took from them.
9/2/23, 4:24 PM
Nice intro. Assuming there's a str8togay element to the conditioning, it will be interesting to see whether it has a different impact on Kyle.
9/1/23, 6:58 PM
This is such a good opening chapter! I love the creepy vibe with the transformed David, and you do a great job of quickly sketching out James and Kyle's relationship. Looking forward to Part 2!

supersean
9/1/23, 8:54 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Wow thank you so much! It's my first story on here and I had a lot of fun writing it. Chapter 2 should be coming out soon!

9/2/23, 4:15 PM
@[supersean](/user/show/10009193) Can I volunteer next please
9/2/23, 4:08 PM
Where can I apply?