Recent Comments

9/2/23, 5:58 PM
I'm delighted to see you continue this storyline. It's a refreshing take on the genre and full of anticipation and potential. Can't wait to read the next installment.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Hopefully coming sooner than the last part. 😊
9/2/23, 4:56 AM
I'm a sucker for process-focused changes and control, so this was a real delight! I'm so glad I finally had the chance to read it.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Glad you liked it!
Whiteypa
9/2/23, 4:52 PM
Always love when Superman's brain is transformed by a hypnotist! Hope to hear more of what happens to the flying boy scout!
mikegay4u
9/2/23, 4:47 PM
I almost felt like I was watching the action in the story rather than reading it. It's so erotic. Such a great story.
9/2/23, 4:47 PM
Looks like everyone got saved in the end. I wonder if Ryan & Gabe will end up together? Can't wait for the aftermath to see what happened to everyone who had their soul took from them.
9/2/23, 4:24 PM
Nice intro. Assuming there's a str8togay element to the conditioning, it will be interesting to see whether it has a different impact on Kyle.
9/1/23, 6:58 PM
This is such a good opening chapter! I love the creepy vibe with the transformed David, and you do a great job of quickly sketching out James and Kyle's relationship. Looking forward to Part 2!

supersean
9/1/23, 8:54 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Wow thank you so much! It's my first story on here and I had a lot of fun writing it. Chapter 2 should be coming out soon!

9/2/23, 4:15 PM
@[supersean](/user/show/10009193) Can I volunteer next please
9/2/23, 4:08 PM
Where can I apply?
9/2/23, 4:04 PM
Great start, looking forward to more!
9/2/23, 12:32 PM
Corps is spelled with an "s." No, Obama, it's not pronounced "corpse."

9/2/23, 3:47 PM
@[Kim_Jaewon](/user/show/1327650) Sounds like you're making an assumption that it "corps". While this story does show military men, we learn in a later chapter that all men are going to be drafted into this program. So let's look the definition for corporation: "a company or group of people authorized to act as a single entity (legally a person) and recognized as such in law." In all honesty, I was probably trying to be clever when I wrote this. I was making a play on words. Trying to trick the reader into thinking it was a military corps when, in fact, it was an corporation being formed. I still think it's kind of funny. But did you just call me Obama? I'm not sure I'm understanding that reference. Please explain.