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Aug 31, 2023
8/31/23, 8:24 AM
I hope someone continues it!

9/1/23, 3:23 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) So do I! I really like the concept; there are just too many other ideas I need to get out of my skull. Plus, some of the writers here are so good I'm excited by what they might do!
9/1/23, 2:49 PM
It's been so long that I have to read the previous stories again, but my God, after all these years I still don't get tired of reading these stories again, thank you for writing!
Elm
9/1/23, 2:18 PM
What a great start!
9/1/23, 2:18 PM
I know you've been super busy. But this is definitely one of the best incest stories on this site. I'm sure all your other readers and myself personally; would very much love to see a continuation of this even years later. If not then I'll just keep reading all your new work. Just please keep writing.
Gay Harem
9/1/23, 1:15 PM
Comment and receive rewards! :heart_eyes: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Chasm
9/1/23, 12:31 PM
While I still really enjoy this story and where it has gone (love Travis realizing he loves getting fucked in the ass. Such a hot twist) the actual scenes where he is submitting to Jamal and Kingston didn’t feel fleshed out enough to me. There wasn’t much info about how Tyler was feeling besides just loving it. Some of the sex scenes just kind of happened in 1-4 short sentences and didn’t pull me in. There wasn’t much detail in them and it kind of bummed me out. Overall a great story still.
9/1/23, 12:06 PM
My only complaint about this fantastic story is that I wish it were about three times longer. It wasn't nearly as cold as you had worried!
9/1/23, 12:03 PM
I have republished this story, fingers are crossed the German parts have been fixed, Thanks to Martin - hope people enjoy it better
9/1/23, 11:49 AM
Finally we see a light at the end of the tunnel. What worries me is that I have two predictions: 1. Because stories go how stories go, I doubt the Clotho will go down without a fight, meaning more changes for Jon. 2. The main prediction is that Jon will give up Greg, letting him stay with Jacob, while Jon will strike up a new relationship with Roberto. Everybody gets a happy ending except for Jon who will get a bittersweet one and eventually forget everything. It would be a story of a great sacrifice (quite literally this time), but it will still feel unsatisfying as Jon will be losing both his body and his love). 2.5. While writing these words I can actually see another option, with a happier ending: Jacob can't be reminded of his marriage to Roberto, but that doesn't mean they can start a NEW relationship. Thus all couples and loves are restored, and Jon is hopefully truly happy with his body. Please chose a happy ending! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! P.s. I also considered the option of a throuple, but that would've left Roberto out. I'm just curious to see if my hunch was correct and I want to have proof. 😅
9/1/23, 11:01 AM
I enjoyed that, guy got what he deserved, looking forward to part 2.