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Chasm
9/1/23, 12:31 PM
While I still really enjoy this story and where it has gone (love Travis realizing he loves getting fucked in the ass. Such a hot twist) the actual scenes where he is submitting to Jamal and Kingston didn’t feel fleshed out enough to me. There wasn’t much info about how Tyler was feeling besides just loving it. Some of the sex scenes just kind of happened in 1-4 short sentences and didn’t pull me in. There wasn’t much detail in them and it kind of bummed me out. Overall a great story still.
9/1/23, 12:06 PM
My only complaint about this fantastic story is that I wish it were about three times longer. It wasn't nearly as cold as you had worried!
9/1/23, 12:03 PM
I have republished this story, fingers are crossed the German parts have been fixed, Thanks to Martin - hope people enjoy it better
9/1/23, 11:49 AM
Finally we see a light at the end of the tunnel. What worries me is that I have two predictions: 1. Because stories go how stories go, I doubt the Clotho will go down without a fight, meaning more changes for Jon. 2. The main prediction is that Jon will give up Greg, letting him stay with Jacob, while Jon will strike up a new relationship with Roberto. Everybody gets a happy ending except for Jon who will get a bittersweet one and eventually forget everything. It would be a story of a great sacrifice (quite literally this time), but it will still feel unsatisfying as Jon will be losing both his body and his love). 2.5. While writing these words I can actually see another option, with a happier ending: Jacob can't be reminded of his marriage to Roberto, but that doesn't mean they can start a NEW relationship. Thus all couples and loves are restored, and Jon is hopefully truly happy with his body. Please chose a happy ending! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! P.s. I also considered the option of a throuple, but that would've left Roberto out. I'm just curious to see if my hunch was correct and I want to have proof. 😅
9/1/23, 11:01 AM
I enjoyed that, guy got what he deserved, looking forward to part 2.
8/20/23, 4:52 PM
W H O L E S O M E ! ! I'm really curious to see where it's going next. The only thing is that I didn't understand why Jason didn't unlock his cage if he wasn't under the influence anymore. Either way, I'm glad you are writing again 🙂

9/1/23, 10:34 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) He didn't unlock his cage because Nathan told him that he'd sent some keys away in order to avoid losing them in his big house.
8/31/23, 9:27 PM
Great work! I just went back and re-read the whole series; I think this is the best chapter yet! Even though we know what's going to happen to Dave and Frank in the flashback, it's still surprisingly suspenseful. I don't know if you're planning on writing any more chapters, but it would be interesting to pick this story up a few weeks or months later, when most men have become infected with Loyalty and only a few pockets of resistance remain.

8/31/23, 9:39 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Speaking of re-reading, I just went through "A New Crop" and the "Jockey" series for probably the hundredth time. I'm not sure which gets me more riled up. Oh .. and the "Brothers In Blue" ... now if you want to talk about needing another chapter, you really should consider continuing that story. Things I've wondered about: 1. What would happen if a man was forced to have the blue rubber bracelet placed on his cock? 2. When will the fire department receive their bracelets? 3. Can we see the cops in action? 4. What's the story regarding Lord Gor'Goth? (I know this story is loosely aligned with 'Bargain', but you can take it to a different place)

9/1/23, 5:12 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) The "Brothers in Blue" was Hypnothrill's take on my "Bargain: Rank and File: Day 2;" he commented that I made the transformation with the day shift too easy and took that part of the story to become the basis for "Brothers in Blue." I have some ideas on how to repay Hypnothrill for making my reworking of Bargain into one of his stories. Now that I got that out of the way, glad to see you back writing. This story definitely reminds me again of going back to the first stories as people have requested me to. I guess I gotta keep up with the masters it would seem.
Zander
9/1/23, 9:54 AM
I hope the sequel will be released soon and the chapter will be longer.
9/1/23, 7:55 AM
Hopefully his dad becomes his slave
9/1/23, 7:40 AM
This is so hot :woozy_face::woozy_face: