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Anonymous
9/1/23, 8:50 PM
So boring!
9/1/23, 3:42 PM
I'm backing away from my "long game" theory in the previous chapter because it stretches credulity that Eddie would go so far as to arrange for himself to be covertly monitored. Which brings us back to the version where Matt wins by virtue of becoming the Greatest Evil.

9/1/23, 4:30 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) I’m wondering if there is no winner and actually Matt & Eddie end up joining forces . Eddie did say to Matt they are like each other

9/1/23, 4:33 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It would certainly be a new creative direction for the author : his previous stories were consistently singularly decisive

9/1/23, 7:13 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Must admit, I still want Eddie to win , hoping he wanted Matt all along 😳
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9/1/23, 6:20 PM
Wow Great Story , More rival Stories like that , enslave him too , tattoo him, hold him tied on all 4 s as your home piggie and force feed him more with tube
9/1/23, 6:11 PM
The author is a very talented writer & I always look forward to the next chapter. However, that said, I haven't found the last few chapters very 'Erotic'...I must admit, I was looking forward to more S.P.H. , premature ejacqulation & general nastyness toward Jon. Of course I'll keep reading due to the high quality of the writing, but would still have loved a little more sexual material...
9/1/23, 4:14 PM
The dad really badly read the room, even before everything went to sh*t. :laughing: Very hot!
9/1/23, 3:51 PM
Just gotta say: HOT HOT HOT!!! From concept to detail, you have me going from the start...and wanting to find my own cock mage (or become one!). Can't wait to read the rest of the series. But first, got to recuperate from this little gem!
Aug 31, 2023
Speaks
9/1/23, 3:11 PM
You named your protagonist “Ben Shapiro”?

9/1/23, 3:36 PM
@[Speaks](/user/show/964546) _“Well, when the war couldn’t kill him and neither could the Republicans, Mother Nature — that bitch — turned to the only thing that could. Cancer. Three weeks. That’s all it took and his body became a memory.”_ There might be a bit of a political riff in this one, but let me assure you with every honest bone in my body: "The characters are fictional. Any similarity to persons dead or alive is coincidental." :)
Aug 31, 2023
9/1/23, 2:40 PM
You write with an amazing & unique voice. This one really stands out. Excellent work. Bravo!!

9/1/23, 3:30 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thank you! The idea just sprang into my head the other day when I was walking past a "retirement" complex thinking about how cool it would be if somehow thieves were punished for their thieving. Weird combination, right? And then, of course, sex had to have its place... ;)
Aug 31, 2023
8/31/23, 10:14 PM
Very good writing! This would be a good screenplay!

9/1/23, 3:24 PM
@[OU812](/user/show/14254) Thank you! LA is in my blood -- can't seem to get very far from movies!
Aug 31, 2023
8/31/23, 8:24 AM
I hope someone continues it!

9/1/23, 3:23 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) So do I! I really like the concept; there are just too many other ideas I need to get out of my skull. Plus, some of the writers here are so good I'm excited by what they might do!