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8/20/23, 4:52 PM
W H O L E S O M E ! ! I'm really curious to see where it's going next. The only thing is that I didn't understand why Jason didn't unlock his cage if he wasn't under the influence anymore. Either way, I'm glad you are writing again 🙂

9/1/23, 10:34 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) He didn't unlock his cage because Nathan told him that he'd sent some keys away in order to avoid losing them in his big house.
8/31/23, 9:27 PM
Great work! I just went back and re-read the whole series; I think this is the best chapter yet! Even though we know what's going to happen to Dave and Frank in the flashback, it's still surprisingly suspenseful. I don't know if you're planning on writing any more chapters, but it would be interesting to pick this story up a few weeks or months later, when most men have become infected with Loyalty and only a few pockets of resistance remain.

8/31/23, 9:39 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Speaking of re-reading, I just went through "A New Crop" and the "Jockey" series for probably the hundredth time. I'm not sure which gets me more riled up. Oh .. and the "Brothers In Blue" ... now if you want to talk about needing another chapter, you really should consider continuing that story. Things I've wondered about: 1. What would happen if a man was forced to have the blue rubber bracelet placed on his cock? 2. When will the fire department receive their bracelets? 3. Can we see the cops in action? 4. What's the story regarding Lord Gor'Goth? (I know this story is loosely aligned with 'Bargain', but you can take it to a different place)

9/1/23, 5:12 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) The "Brothers in Blue" was Hypnothrill's take on my "Bargain: Rank and File: Day 2;" he commented that I made the transformation with the day shift too easy and took that part of the story to become the basis for "Brothers in Blue." I have some ideas on how to repay Hypnothrill for making my reworking of Bargain into one of his stories. Now that I got that out of the way, glad to see you back writing. This story definitely reminds me again of going back to the first stories as people have requested me to. I guess I gotta keep up with the masters it would seem.
Zander
9/1/23, 9:54 AM
I hope the sequel will be released soon and the chapter will be longer.
9/1/23, 7:55 AM
Hopefully his dad becomes his slave
9/1/23, 7:40 AM
This is so hot :woozy_face::woozy_face:
9/1/23, 1:06 AM
Oooh! How did I miss this little gem? I like all of your stories that I've read, but somehow I only just discovered these chapters when the most recent one (4?) was posted. I really liked chapter 1. Awesome jack-off material! I look forward to the next part.
8/31/23, 11:59 PM
This is the direction that I hoped would happen. We are not quite there as Matt has not defeated Eddie yet. If he were to do it, it would be exactly what I wanted. No pressure though. Write as you Re writing and we will be happy.
8/31/23, 9:58 PM
you might want to have a Gemran fix the translation the skinhead conned need teeth braces maybe you mean "Hosenträger"
8/31/23, 9:48 PM
I love the 2001 references. Frank Poole and Dave Bowman? Where’s Hal? Loved this series. Glad it’s continuing.

8/31/23, 9:53 PM
@[Bush41](/user/show/909690) Yeah ... I really should've included HAL. I imagined him to be the earpieces. After all, it's basically a program, a super A.I., that's monitoring all the men, and programming them. Maybe I should have included a circular red light , or camera monitoring the activity within the club. But still, I wasn't sure where to actually say the name "Hal". It just didn't seem to make sense to put it anywhere. But he's definitely there in their ears.
Aug 30, 2023
Anonymous
8/31/23, 9:52 PM
Please please do more with this