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8/31/23, 2:20 PM
Still an amazing story keeping us all invested. I always fantasized about a Clothos figure in my life to change things up and try living different circumstances, though hopefully I would have more input in the results. Loving it.
Anonymous
8/31/23, 1:08 PM
can't wait for this to continue
Enchanting-Sorcerer-Boy
8/31/23, 12:40 PM
Fantastic work!!!
8/31/23, 11:47 AM
Really cool twist!
8/31/23, 9:29 AM
Well, that was certainly worth the wait! I can't wait to see how Jon's plan plays out and what lies in store for Greg and Jacob. Hoping there's still a chance for a happy ending for the three of them!
2/19/23, 3:49 AM
Very fun and hot fantasy with a great horny payoff at the climax (I'll just ignore the horror aspect of robbing people of their 20's and 30's and pushing them that much closer to death).

8/31/23, 9:21 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Perhaps they only physically become a daddy on the outside? They stay their original age internally. They have the same number of years that they would have had. I hope that's how it works anyway.
8/31/23, 9:18 AM
noted i used google translate
8/31/23, 9:17 AM
This hot story got me off. A perfect story to j/o to if you like daddy bears. I know from recent experience.
8/31/23, 8:57 AM
I find it a bit difficult to accept that cold cruel Jacob is a victim in this. I know he is being dominated by Clotho but there doesn't seem to be much of any the original human Jacob left in him. Even if they defeat Clotho he'll still be the the weaver of lives and a very corrupt one. Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos are the 3 fates. Clotho weaves the thread of life for a person, Lachesis measures out the length and Atropos cuts the line meaning the person dies. If Clotho will still be a weaver of lives he can mess with anyone. I hope Clotho's power is removed completely although I doubt it will be. He is an essential part of the tapestry of life. That being said it would take a very very long time of repenting before I or anyone could trust him again. He should be forced to undo the alterations he has caused in peoples' lives.
Anonymous
8/31/23, 8:45 AM
It had some good parts, but the botched German did ruin it for me. There was a constant switch between informal "du" and formal "Sie", some words are purely nonsensical, and others were wrongly translated (though the thought of Axel wearing the bleachers like the one for an audience to stand on, and braces to straighten his teeth is amusing). Advise there: Get someone who speaks the language to proofread.