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8/31/23, 8:57 AM
I find it a bit difficult to accept that cold cruel Jacob is a victim in this. I know he is being dominated by Clotho but there doesn't seem to be much of any the original human Jacob left in him. Even if they defeat Clotho he'll still be the the weaver of lives and a very corrupt one. Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos are the 3 fates. Clotho weaves the thread of life for a person, Lachesis measures out the length and Atropos cuts the line meaning the person dies. If Clotho will still be a weaver of lives he can mess with anyone. I hope Clotho's power is removed completely although I doubt it will be. He is an essential part of the tapestry of life. That being said it would take a very very long time of repenting before I or anyone could trust him again. He should be forced to undo the alterations he has caused in peoples' lives.
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8/31/23, 8:45 AM
It had some good parts, but the botched German did ruin it for me. There was a constant switch between informal "du" and formal "Sie", some words are purely nonsensical, and others were wrongly translated (though the thought of Axel wearing the bleachers like the one for an audience to stand on, and braces to straighten his teeth is amusing). Advise there: Get someone who speaks the language to proofread.
8/31/23, 6:33 AM
Hot as fuck m8
8/31/23, 4:59 AM
Love it! Love me some good surfer himbos.
8/31/23, 3:55 AM
please do!
Enchanting-Sorcerer-Boy
8/31/23, 3:31 AM
FANTASTIC. Pure sex, bravo.
8/31/23, 3:28 AM
SIGN ME UP PLSSSS :3333 aaa I don't see cradling a lot in many romantic stories, and this omg, I want to be Chris so badly being cradled and tenderly & affectionately cared for by Jason
8/31/23, 2:20 AM
I am really, really loving this.

8/31/23, 2:28 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Oh thank you! This is one of those stories where I thought pretty much nobody would like it.
8/31/23, 1:22 AM
Very well done!
8/31/23, 1:18 AM
thank you for one more part, let's see in what Asher will be turned into