Recent Comments

8/29/23, 4:31 AM
What a hot finale. Even though im not a fan of the villains winning, ill accept this. The twist and turn. I enjoyed this twisted tale of superheroes and villains.

8/29/23, 9:27 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you very much! I have to admit that I _wanted_ to give the pair a happy ending, but it slipped through my fingers as I wrote the last few chapters.
8/29/23, 9:22 PM
I think I need to get it all out of my system too. Anyone got some Gatorade?
8/29/23, 8:53 PM
I like it, thank you for sharing this story with us
Anonymous
8/29/23, 8:48 PM
Spectacular work!!
Anonymous
8/29/23, 7:58 PM
This was so hot! So excited to read the next chapter.
8/29/23, 3:00 PM
Mmmmm very good let's have more fun with him

8/29/23, 4:23 PM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) I’m sure they’re going to get a lot of use, very soon.

8/29/23, 5:15 PM
@Wakeup Let's hope it doesn't go past 19 he will be stuck for a while 🤣🤣🤣🤣

8/29/23, 6:27 PM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) Now that would be a shame. 😏
8/29/23, 5:52 PM
Great story not sure where it goes from here maybe there is a 3rd friend or another bully gets involved but u are doing great
Anonymous
8/27/23, 2:15 PM
I got confused. Doesn't he get 3 cards but picks only 1? I'm not following all 3 at each story. I may not be getting it. Not being critical, just trying to follow.

8/27/23, 2:43 PM
@Anonymous When I posted this story on Tumblr, each chapter included a three-option poll. The option that won each poll is the first, largest section of the chapter, which continues the main story. I also wrote short versions of the other two options, which don't continue the story. I think I should have clarified that in the text haha.

Anonymous
8/29/23, 4:59 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) thanks

Martin
8/29/23, 5:05 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) You could use the branching feature of this site to present the alternative story pathes.
8/29/23, 3:44 PM
My god this is hot! Hope there'll be more to come!