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Mind bender
8/23/23, 1:31 AM
The final wish! The interaction between Sanjay and Tristan is cute. I hope there's another kaa like scene. I love those. Great job on this 👏 👍🏼

8/28/23, 9:01 PM
@Mind bender I’m not sure I can do that in the next chapter, but I’ll definitely see what I can do on the chapter after that, shouldn’t be too hard.
8/28/23, 8:43 PM
Loved this! You gave us a really nice world-view while still coming back to recurring characters. Well done!
8/28/23, 7:30 PM
Can't wait for the next installment and to see where it goes - Will they both gradually transform each other? How much so?
8/28/23, 4:17 PM
Love the story! Really appreciate the detail and description of Jelk and the orcs. It’s one of my favorite now!
8/28/23, 4:08 PM
Ese papá si que se puso a divertirse XD me encanta como va la historia, no puedo esperar para leer mas :3 💙💙💙💙
8/28/23, 3:51 PM
Love this! It’s sweet, well written, and well paced. And of course very hot. Would love to read more stories about these two.
8/28/23, 3:11 PM
I enjoy the way he resists his changes and keeps the new and old in some kind of balance. I prefer when personalities aren’t totally overwritten (though I understand this is already written, and things might change, lol). But the changes are great and he’s a damn mankiller, getting ass left and right, I love it.
Muscle-Flex
8/27/23, 8:16 PM
Oh man, you took a little break and came back on fire! The erotic humiliation of my favorite jock boys was ripe and delightful! I thought macho dad Bruce stuck as a food platter was a hot image from the get-go, but then... his stiffie with the hollow sounding rod converted into a kind of vase for a spray of flowers!!! Well, let's just say it was a good thing that I was not in a public place when I read that. BOING! Ingenious! The fact that they are all forced to give up their ball cream, but get no actual relief, worked perfectly in this scenario. It really highlighted the nature of the predicament the muscle boys are in. Of course, you had to tease us with that little snippet of Coach Jenkins. The image of that manly stud sitting in his chair sloooowly rubbing himself into empty-headedness while he falls deeper into Dexter's hypnotic trap is going to linger in my mind until the next chapter appears! :football::muscle::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

8/28/23, 5:03 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thanks! I appreciate your comment.

JB
8/28/23, 2:31 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) So when will the next chapter be released?
Elm
8/28/23, 2:04 PM
Me gusto!
8/28/23, 12:21 PM
This chapter was really hot and Kingston is just the best!