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8/28/23, 3:11 PM
I enjoy the way he resists his changes and keeps the new and old in some kind of balance. I prefer when personalities aren’t totally overwritten (though I understand this is already written, and things might change, lol). But the changes are great and he’s a damn mankiller, getting ass left and right, I love it.
Muscle-Flex
8/27/23, 8:16 PM
Oh man, you took a little break and came back on fire! The erotic humiliation of my favorite jock boys was ripe and delightful! I thought macho dad Bruce stuck as a food platter was a hot image from the get-go, but then... his stiffie with the hollow sounding rod converted into a kind of vase for a spray of flowers!!! Well, let's just say it was a good thing that I was not in a public place when I read that. BOING! Ingenious! The fact that they are all forced to give up their ball cream, but get no actual relief, worked perfectly in this scenario. It really highlighted the nature of the predicament the muscle boys are in. Of course, you had to tease us with that little snippet of Coach Jenkins. The image of that manly stud sitting in his chair sloooowly rubbing himself into empty-headedness while he falls deeper into Dexter's hypnotic trap is going to linger in my mind until the next chapter appears! :football::muscle::stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

8/28/23, 5:03 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thanks! I appreciate your comment.

JB
8/28/23, 2:31 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) So when will the next chapter be released?
Elm
8/28/23, 2:04 PM
Me gusto!
8/28/23, 12:21 PM
This chapter was really hot and Kingston is just the best!
Zander
8/28/23, 11:46 AM
Many of the stories I read inspired me to try writing a story and publish it on the site. Soon I will write my first experimental story, publish it on the site and see how it goes. Unfortunately, I often fail to publish the story, as my personal life interferes a little, but I will try to post everything as often as possible. Unfortunately, English is not my native language, so there may be a mistake when writing a chapter of the story. In writing this chapter, I will try to keep these errors to a minimum. I am currently working on the structure and concept of this story with the main characters and plot. I'm on vacation right now and can't start writing like my computer is at home yet(. But the concept and plot are already in my head. I can say with confidence that the chapters will be voluminous. A short summary of the stories: *The first story is about a new neighbor who bought a house across the street and turned out to be blind and with a dark secret. *The second story will be about a man who got into the alternative world of Gay erotic hypnosis.
Zander
8/28/23, 9:43 AM
A very good erotic story and a good sequel. The only drawback of such stories is that they are of the same type and similar to each other in that the beginning and end of the story are obvious, as well as the ending. As a result, the story becomes boring. It would be nice if the author of the story experimented with plot twists (let's say Roger failed to brainwash one of the guys, as a result he would go against Roger and reveal him) or one of the relatives of the victims would understand that something was is not happening and accidentally revealed everything. There are many different ways to develop this story and other stories of this type. I would like to read more stories of this type.
Apr 29, 2022
8/28/23, 8:16 AM
What?! No second chapter!!
8/28/23, 4:26 AM
This was definitely one of the most inventive stories I've read here! And what a fun way to put a fleshlight into the mix!
8/28/23, 3:41 AM
This is seriously good stuff
Malemann54
8/28/23, 2:27 AM
Intersting to see a man turned into a top rather than a bottom which is the usual effect of these storis.