Recent Comments

8/26/23, 6:05 AM
Me encanta por donde va esto, ya quiero ver el momento de quiebre de Rafa 🔥
8/25/23, 10:02 PM
I'm really loving where you are taking this story. And you have given us a lot of nuggets for us to use to feed our own imaginations. This is until the time you get a chance to post the official update.

8/26/23, 5:43 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) thank you. I like leaving ideas open and while I will circle back to some things-like his team leader and CIA guy from part one- other parts like Yates's second visit to the club will likely be left to your imagination which I hope you enjoy.
8/26/23, 5:36 AM
Wow, I'm actually a bit upset that I missed this when it was first uploaded two weeks ago, but I'm glad that I found it now! Very good work - managing to convey a light, almost otherworldly tone, while still grounding it in reality. Looking forward to the rest of Luke's story and his relationship with Clay, keep it up!
8/26/23, 12:58 AM
This hit a few sweet spots for me.

8/26/23, 4:23 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) That makes this all worth it, thank you
8/26/23, 4:11 AM
You do such a great job of humanizing everyone in this story!
8/26/23, 4:02 AM
Previously story was even better but it's still the best story on this site! Hope you write even more. Fortunately there are sites with less censorship for your works.
Anonymous
8/26/23, 3:51 AM
Love this chapter! Can’t wait the gay club gets their own slave form the football team!
8/26/23, 3:48 AM
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
8/26/23, 3:33 AM
🤗🤗🤗💪💪💪😛😛😛🤤🤤🤤
8/26/23, 3:25 AM
So, SO good!!