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8/26/23, 12:54 PM
The gradual transformation was incredible, and the sexual payoff was hot as fuck! I really enjoyed this, and the more cum the better.
8/26/23, 8:44 AM
I love the way your wording actually seems as much like an induction for the reader as the Naga's induction for his prey. It certainly feels that way. Not only does the present environment fade away, my imagination is captured and my mind seems to meld with that of the Naga's prey. Normally i think 'vore' would be off-putting for me. i couldn't really imagine how arousing the idea of vore could be, yet by the end of the story i feel blissfully enthralled, aroused, and completely ready to slip down that dark coiled path with Theo. There is definitely something magically hypnotic about your stories. Thanks so much!
4/15/23, 6:42 AM
Great story I'd like to see them eventually take 'Josh' on as their sub boy.

4/15/23, 5:05 PM
@[Trotskisaurus](/user/show/949527) Had an idea similar to that as well, but decided to leave it here and let the imagination run wild with what the future is like for the new Josh

8/26/23, 8:43 AM
@[Trotskisaurus](/user/show/949527) I don't want to spam but, there is a story called "Down of an alpha", basically a slave auction, I like to think that's where Josh ends :3
8/26/23, 6:05 AM
Me encanta por donde va esto, ya quiero ver el momento de quiebre de Rafa 🔥
8/25/23, 10:02 PM
I'm really loving where you are taking this story. And you have given us a lot of nuggets for us to use to feed our own imaginations. This is until the time you get a chance to post the official update.

8/26/23, 5:43 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) thank you. I like leaving ideas open and while I will circle back to some things-like his team leader and CIA guy from part one- other parts like Yates's second visit to the club will likely be left to your imagination which I hope you enjoy.
8/26/23, 5:36 AM
Wow, I'm actually a bit upset that I missed this when it was first uploaded two weeks ago, but I'm glad that I found it now! Very good work - managing to convey a light, almost otherworldly tone, while still grounding it in reality. Looking forward to the rest of Luke's story and his relationship with Clay, keep it up!
8/26/23, 12:58 AM
This hit a few sweet spots for me.

8/26/23, 4:23 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) That makes this all worth it, thank you
8/26/23, 4:11 AM
You do such a great job of humanizing everyone in this story!
8/26/23, 4:02 AM
Previously story was even better but it's still the best story on this site! Hope you write even more. Fortunately there are sites with less censorship for your works.
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8/26/23, 3:51 AM
Love this chapter! Can’t wait the gay club gets their own slave form the football team!